Comment from Cheryl Daphine

Excellent

I love your acrostic poem Ina.The words and clip are so childlike and precious. We are all called to become as a little child. Simply put,'trusting.'Very well written,and best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2011

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2011

Thanks so much for your excellent and thoughtful review. Take care, ine

Comment from Dutchie

Exceptional

Hi Ine. Great work this poem. So true the words you wrote.
Religion is in us. No matter what your religion is. It is a way of living. We all believe in God, sometimes in another way, but we all have the same thoughts about Love ,Harmony
and compassion.Great job. Liefs Fia

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2011

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2011

Thanks so much for your excellent and thoughtful review. Take care, Ine. Thanks so much for the six. Love those-LOL.
Third one in 12 hours I think. Forgot to phone yesterday-sorry.

reply by Dutchie on 03-Nov-2011

It does not matter, we talk another time. Liefs Fia

reply by the author on 03-Nov-2011

we certainly will. Liefs, Ine

Comment from ameen786

Excellent

Hello robina, my friend, in simple down to earth vocabulary you deliver a powerful message about universal brotherhood, I love it, thanks for sharing your sublime poetry.

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2011

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2011

Thanks so much for your excellent and thoughtful review. Take care, Ine

Comment from rchitwood

Excellent

Very inspiring poem and I love the lesson in it for all of us.Your poem has smooth line flow and images of Faith.I love your music so cute and your photo compliments your poem well Blessings Rita

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2011

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2011

Thanks so much for your excellent and thoughtful review. Take care, Ine

Comment from skye

Excellent

This is a creative take on form, strong message about faith, wonderful imagery inside the lines.
Faith is strong, religion is necessary for so many of us.
I love this poem.

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2011

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2011

Thanks so much for your excellent and thoughtful review. Take care, Ine

Comment from Melspoems

Excellent

Hi Ine, nice to see you in your pic :)

This is a clever poem about religion and faith, and how we should all try to live our lives.

I wonder if the last line would read better as "Near and in to heaven"

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2011

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2011

Thanks so much for your excellent and thoughtful review. Take care, Ine. Will check.

Comment from misscookie

Exceptional

I think tyhe artwork is awesome.
and it goes well with your lovely oem
your words are very uplifting and the vfideo was a perfect
touch. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2011

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2011

Thanks so much for your excellent and thoughtful review. Take care, Ine

reply by misscookie on 03-Nov-2011

It was my pleasure. Have a nice day.

Comment from Maureen's Pen

Excellent

Great acrostic on faith and what that means in our lives.
Nicely formed and flowed well from line to line.

"Though times can be rough
Hold on to your Faith"
These lines above were great openers for this faith poem. I have found holding on through the rapids of life with faith is the smoothest ride to freedom.

Thanks for sharing. And good luck in the contest.
Maureen

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2011

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2011

Thanks so much for your excellent and thoughtful review. Take care, Ine

Comment from the blue pixel

Excellent

This poem is one I just can't relate to Ine as I am sure you know but I can quite easily substitute your word Faith, for faith in myself. I agree, that we should not give hate to others, difficult as this may be sometimes. I often envy you and others, their Faith. It must be very comforting for you my friend. I am sorry I am unable to review this more constructrively for you but I have done my best for you. xx Pix

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2011

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2011

Thanks so much for your excellent and thoughtful review. Take care, Ine. Appreciate that hon.

reply by the blue pixel on 03-Nov-2011

You're always welcome Ine. This kind of poem is hard for me but because you wrote it, I did my best. xx Pix

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hi robina,
I like your Acrostic contest poem
The only thing you should look at are the following lines

O r you might go down
U nder water --why water ?

Gert

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2011

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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2011

Thanks so much for your kind and thoughtful review. Take care, Ine. Just came into my mind, sounded good.