The Ice Princess
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "Merry Christmas to All"Love, Hate, Conflicts and Fear
29 total reviews
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Nice happy ending, hopefully there is a "happy ever after" to it as well, there should be, its been quite a journey for them. Very well done, the ending is perfect for this story.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2009
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Nice happy ending, hopefully there is a "happy ever after" to it as well, there should be, its been quite a journey for them. Very well done, the ending is perfect for this story.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2009
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Patrick
Thank you so much for reading the story. I greatly appreciate it. Carol
Comment from Phil Kitom
Joy to the world she's done it again
Created a moving story without a pen
Typed it with love for all to see
A wonderful author for all FanStory.
Well done Carol another Excellent
story from an Excellent author...
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2009
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Joy to the world she's done it again
Created a moving story without a pen
Typed it with love for all to see
A wonderful author for all FanStory.
Well done Carol another Excellent
story from an Excellent author...
Comment Written 14-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2009
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Phil
You just know how to make me burst out smiling, don't you. I am extremely flattered. This is the second poem I have received this week. You spoil me with kindness my friend. Thank you for enjoying the story and wishing me well. Always a friend, CArol
Comment from Joan E.
What a kind message at the beginning (of the end) to all your readers. And what a perfect message at the conclusion of the story with caroling. I think you use of the brief Spanish phrases added to the story's authenticity, and you communicated everyone's joy well, when she said "All is forgiven" and his present was cruise tickets for a honeymoon!
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2009
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What a kind message at the beginning (of the end) to all your readers. And what a perfect message at the conclusion of the story with caroling. I think you use of the brief Spanish phrases added to the story's authenticity, and you communicated everyone's joy well, when she said "All is forgiven" and his present was cruise tickets for a honeymoon!
Comment Written 14-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2009
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Joan
I am thrilled that you took notice of some of the smaller messages that actually meant a lot more to me than the whole picture. You picked up even on the Caroling...Glad you enjoyed it and I thank you for your comments. Carol
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Linda,
so happy that Rilley and Max finally realized the were met to get back together,
It makes you chapter look like a fairy tale chapter, especially all taking place on Christmas eve
A delightful chapter to read
thank you for sharing.
Gert
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2009
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Hello Linda,
so happy that Rilley and Max finally realized the were met to get back together,
It makes you chapter look like a fairy tale chapter, especially all taking place on Christmas eve
A delightful chapter to read
thank you for sharing.
Gert
Comment Written 14-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2009
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Gert
Glad you enjoyed the story. Appreciate the feedback. Smiles, Carol
Comment from fictionwriter
What a perfect ending, although I wonder if they shouldn't have got to know each other again. People change over time, but what the heck. Go for the gold. Great job.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2009
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What a perfect ending, although I wonder if they shouldn't have got to know each other again. People change over time, but what the heck. Go for the gold. Great job.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2009
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Joy
Probably should have waited but those 10,000 word's were chopping away. Thanks for the review. CArol
Comment from lola29
Carol, your story was absolutely wonderful. This chapter is the best because it brought two people together who loved each other for all those many years. You really turned Max into our hero, and I could feel my heart beating when he bought the Christmas tree and the presents.
You've got a winner here.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2009
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Carol, your story was absolutely wonderful. This chapter is the best because it brought two people together who loved each other for all those many years. You really turned Max into our hero, and I could feel my heart beating when he bought the Christmas tree and the presents.
You've got a winner here.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2009
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Lola
Do you really think it's a good ending...not too corny? It made me happy, but I wasn't sure about other readers. I'm a smuck for Christmas and mushy endings. Thanks for the review and your kind and thoughtful words. Carol
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The contest was about a Christmas theme, therefore, I don't know how you could have made it any better because everyone likes a happy ending.
Comment from jadapenn
Carol, Carol where have I been? Here I parachute into the delicious end of your book. What can I say, I'm a bad girl and should really keep a tab on what you get up to.
This was so emotional. I missed all the stress and strain to get to this good ending.
Beautiful ending, my friend.
But let me go and shake up the game reserve. luv jada
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2009
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Carol, Carol where have I been? Here I parachute into the delicious end of your book. What can I say, I'm a bad girl and should really keep a tab on what you get up to.
This was so emotional. I missed all the stress and strain to get to this good ending.
Beautiful ending, my friend.
But let me go and shake up the game reserve. luv jada
Comment Written 14-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2009
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Jada
Yes, I had hoped you would have dropped in so that I could get your viewpoint on the story. I love your writing and always appreciate another's ideas. Thanks for the review.
Carol
Comment from dmjones
This was really nice way to end. It's a good story Carol if it don't make there definitely try it elsewhere.
One thing I spotted:
checked all the door(s) and windows
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2009
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This was really nice way to end. It's a good story Carol if it don't make there definitely try it elsewhere.
One thing I spotted:
checked all the door(s) and windows
Comment Written 14-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2009
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Donna
Thanks so much. I expected more because I posted this when I was exhausted. Thank you so much. As always, your comments are always encouraging. Carol
Comment from Suzie B
Aaaawww, you did it, made me smile and cry and hunger for christmas, a love Christmas time, my very favorite time of year.
This is a stunning ending to a terrific story well done and congratulations on a damn fine piece of writing.
Hugs and smiles
Suzie
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2009
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Aaaawww, you did it, made me smile and cry and hunger for christmas, a love Christmas time, my very favorite time of year.
This is a stunning ending to a terrific story well done and congratulations on a damn fine piece of writing.
Hugs and smiles
Suzie
Comment Written 14-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2009
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Suzie
Thanks so much for the review. You sure this didn't come across as corny? I wanted the feel good feeling . I am so glad that you enjoyed my story and I can't thank you enough for allthe kind encouragement. Hugs to you, Carol
Comment from Belinda
Wow... this is pretty quick ending. Maybe it is just me, hoping to know more about the children victims at the start of this story. Anyway, this is a happy ending...
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2009
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Wow... this is pretty quick ending. Maybe it is just me, hoping to know more about the children victims at the start of this story. Anyway, this is a happy ending...
Comment Written 14-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2009
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Belinda
I wanted to include the investigation and more about the people, but I am only allowed 10,000 words and when I roughed it out, I had to eliminate a lot. I wish we would have had more space. Thanks for following and reading. Carol
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Oh, is there a limitation? What is your work called? Long short story or novelette, maybe? Who knows one day I will write something like that.
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Belinda
It's a novella but the Publishing Company that is sponsering the contest said between 1000 and 10000 words. It makes it difficult, especially with so much happening in this story line. Thanks again Carol
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What do you mean with sponsoring? Do you or FS get something? Just curious...
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Belinda
Yes a publishing contract to the winner...It's under the Romance Contest. Have you not seen it? There is still time...Carol
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I did, but I soon forgot about it as I did not have any inspirations for a romance.
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I know you have a bountiful basket of love within you...You just haven't found how you want to express it yet. Hugs, Carol
