Comment from Judian James

Excellent

"Righteous arrogance
Righteous Lebanon cedar
Cedar aroma memories
Cedar to preserve" good little grouping right here Sue!
Did you enjoy the blitz? It's fun once you get going, don't you think?

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2009

Comment from Freeflyer

Excellent

I am certainly one for trying something new but this type of poetry will not see my pen to paper. What a difficult task you took on. As far as I can see you did it well enough. Because of the rules the message is very fragmented. Well done you deserve a five.
Freeflyer

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2009

Comment from glacierbabe

Excellent

LOL Ok, I read it and then read it again.
I have no idea if it is right or not.
I liked it.
It is certainly different.
I applaud you for even trying it LOL
Good Job! :0

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2009

Comment from Dklrdmcches

Excellent

I am not a fan of this piece at all. This was very different for me and as you have written, different for you. I a going to give you 5 because you obviously worked hard to create this piece...DKLRD

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2009

Comment from malachi1206

Excellent

This looks like a neat format you seemed to have mastered it pretty well I might try this one too one day overall I considered this an excellent write malachi1206

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2009

Comment from Wendyanne

Excellent

Hi Sixteezkid. This is certainly a very strange form of poetry and it looks complicated too but you have made a very good job of it. Good luck

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2009

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

This is a well written poem with a very fast pace of words. It is a very easy read with good imagery and descriptive scheme.

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2009

Comment from dportwood

Excellent

Well done writing done in accordance with the characteristics and requirements of the BLITZ style of poetry. Maybe I'll try it. Good luck in the contest.

Duane

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2009

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

I like this style and the way it allows the mind to free associate - and I also love the jazzy sound of it - you have certainly used it to good effect to create a poem of tragic intensity. Brooke

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2009

Comment from amada

Excellent

This is a very witty and refreshing form I haven't seen this type of poem before. It seems as good and non threating writing.

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2009