CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from shimmeringlights
This is my favorite so far in this contest. The picture illustrates you words perfectly. Great imagery is this short well written poem. Good luck.
This is my favorite so far in this contest. The picture illustrates you words perfectly. Great imagery is this short well written poem. Good luck.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2009
Comment from sherrygreywolf
Truly lovely choice of words to describe autumn. The vivid image your poem invokes matches the picture beautifully. Great job, Sue.
Hope you're having a great weekend - sherry
Truly lovely choice of words to describe autumn. The vivid image your poem invokes matches the picture beautifully. Great job, Sue.
Hope you're having a great weekend - sherry
Comment Written 29-Mar-2009
Comment from Nanette Mary
Hullo Sixteezkid ....
In your thirteen well-chosen and descriptive words,
you have so well-described an Autumn scene as being comparable with a patch-work quilt. I have always thought of the English countryside as being like such a quilt and now your words have reminded me of this impression, gained more than sixty years ago during my first time of living in England.
Thank you for sharing this with us. As it is a Contest entry, I wish you well.
With love from ..... Nanette Mary.
Hullo Sixteezkid ....
In your thirteen well-chosen and descriptive words,
you have so well-described an Autumn scene as being comparable with a patch-work quilt. I have always thought of the English countryside as being like such a quilt and now your words have reminded me of this impression, gained more than sixty years ago during my first time of living in England.
Thank you for sharing this with us. As it is a Contest entry, I wish you well.
With love from ..... Nanette Mary.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2009
Comment from Rottie
Well, I certainly have no trouble getting the metaphor! Another shorty and powerful (with picture) as usual.
Artful write!
Well, I certainly have no trouble getting the metaphor! Another shorty and powerful (with picture) as usual.
Artful write!
Comment Written 29-Mar-2009
Comment from geetika sethi
WONDERFUL
AN APPLIQUE OF WORDS
PATCHED BEAUTIFULLY TO
MAKE ONE COZY IS ALL I CAN SAY!!!
THANKS SIXTEEZKID!!!
ALL THE BEST ALWAYS...
WONDERFUL
AN APPLIQUE OF WORDS
PATCHED BEAUTIFULLY TO
MAKE ONE COZY IS ALL I CAN SAY!!!
THANKS SIXTEEZKID!!!
ALL THE BEST ALWAYS...
Comment Written 29-Mar-2009
Comment from Counting Carrots
The first Haiku I ever wrote was about autumn! I do love them so, and aumtumn just as much. Your poem was good, followed all the format haiku should. Well done.
The first Haiku I ever wrote was about autumn! I do love them so, and aumtumn just as much. Your poem was good, followed all the format haiku should. Well done.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2009
Comment from FredCollingwood
Everyone is just getting started on writing spring poetry--this writing prompt is making sure it beats everyone to the punch. Another great one!
Everyone is just getting started on writing spring poetry--this writing prompt is making sure it beats everyone to the punch. Another great one!
Comment Written 29-Mar-2009
Comment from Bryana
Beautiful Haiku.
The picture sure looks
like a patchwork, it
complements your poem
very well.
I also love the colors.
Excellent choice.
I wish you good luck in the contest.
Beautiful Haiku.
The picture sure looks
like a patchwork, it
complements your poem
very well.
I also love the colors.
Excellent choice.
I wish you good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2009
Comment from NightWriter
"Quilt of Nature" is a creative haiku poem. It paints a beautiful picture of the many colors of autumn, and I like the quilt comparison. Well done.
"Quilt of Nature" is a creative haiku poem. It paints a beautiful picture of the many colors of autumn, and I like the quilt comparison. Well done.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2009
Comment from amada
This is a great haiku because it painted a entire spectrum of Autumn images within just a few words. The art work is lovely and colorful as well.
This is a great haiku because it painted a entire spectrum of Autumn images within just a few words. The art work is lovely and colorful as well.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2009