CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Sue...when I run across yet another poetry form I have never heard of I think I must be ignorant! I admit I have never heard of this guy but having said that this poem is lovely. So few syllables but you made sense while writing in the confines of this form. Great poem with a fine message and thanks for making me smarter today! Blessings....chey
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Hi Sue...when I run across yet another poetry form I have never heard of I think I must be ignorant! I admit I have never heard of this guy but having said that this poem is lovely. So few syllables but you made sense while writing in the confines of this form. Great poem with a fine message and thanks for making me smarter today! Blessings....chey
Comment Written 27-Feb-2009
Comment from Brandenpaul
I admire your guts to try all these different types and I admire your ability to write them so well. I enjoy having to think about the message in these short pieces. I like the deep thought but find it fun to sum it up simply too. Everyone needs their mommy-forever.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2009
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I admire your guts to try all these different types and I admire your ability to write them so well. I enjoy having to think about the message in these short pieces. I like the deep thought but find it fun to sum it up simply too. Everyone needs their mommy-forever.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2009
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HA! Well put!!! Everyone needs Mommy forever. Our search for that unconditional love, and all the emotional and physical needs go on forever. Thanks so much for your very good read. And your review. Sue :-))
Comment from malachi1206
I've seen this style or at least read about it and it really interests me I'm sure I will try this one eventually this was excellent malachi1206
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I've seen this style or at least read about it and it really interests me I'm sure I will try this one eventually this was excellent malachi1206
Comment Written 27-Feb-2009
Comment from rhymelord
Sue, An original use to which to put the Fibonacci sequence and a nicely flowing sentiment. What's next? Quantum physics or string theory. Obviously, no nits can I find, you crafty lioness.
Regards
Reg
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2009
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Sue, An original use to which to put the Fibonacci sequence and a nicely flowing sentiment. What's next? Quantum physics or string theory. Obviously, no nits can I find, you crafty lioness.
Regards
Reg
Comment Written 27-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2009
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Hoping for string theory!! YES!! Worm holes, too! How about the Multi-verse instead of universe theory? Great stuff out there, huh? Ah HAH! Cheated the hyena again! LOL!! Thanks for your great and fun review. Sue :-))
Comment from Loyd C. Taylor, Sr
Good morning Sue and this is a brand new stylr of poem for me. I think your notes give a good explainantion of the poem and you certainly did a great job with it. I enjoyed, LOyd
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Good morning Sue and this is a brand new stylr of poem for me. I think your notes give a good explainantion of the poem and you certainly did a great job with it. I enjoyed, LOyd
Comment Written 27-Feb-2009
Comment from Lady & Louis
I like the way the syllable structure dictates the pace of this one, Sixteezkid. The deliberate pacing (as I read it) of the shorter lines leads to the rush of the last, with the culmination of the message. Yes, we are needy creatures, aren't we - over and above the essential needs of food and shelter!
Cheers,
LL
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I like the way the syllable structure dictates the pace of this one, Sixteezkid. The deliberate pacing (as I read it) of the shorter lines leads to the rush of the last, with the culmination of the message. Yes, we are needy creatures, aren't we - over and above the essential needs of food and shelter!
Cheers,
LL
Comment Written 26-Feb-2009
Comment from volunteer angel
It's odd how a mathematician can come up with something as neat as this poem structure. I never realized that math had anything to do with painting or this kind of poetry. I've learned another type of writing that I never knew existed. Great job! V.A.
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It's odd how a mathematician can come up with something as neat as this poem structure. I never realized that math had anything to do with painting or this kind of poetry. I've learned another type of writing that I never knew existed. Great job! V.A.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2009
Comment from Gramma Kathy
Thanks for the author's notes on this new-to-me form of poetry. But now my brain hurts! (I'm really no good at math.) :0
Your poem, though short, speaks volumes. I am impressed. I like the artwork, too; it complements your work perfectly.
I appreciate the poetry lesson, and I love the poem itself. Well done!
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Thanks for the author's notes on this new-to-me form of poetry. But now my brain hurts! (I'm really no good at math.) :0
Your poem, though short, speaks volumes. I am impressed. I like the artwork, too; it complements your work perfectly.
I appreciate the poetry lesson, and I love the poem itself. Well done!
Comment Written 26-Feb-2009
Comment from spellbound
This is great.
Your choice of words is great. No matter what one might think is a fundamental desire, you have it covered.
Best of all, this covers a lifetime of possibly changing needs.
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This is great.
Your choice of words is great. No matter what one might think is a fundamental desire, you have it covered.
Best of all, this covers a lifetime of possibly changing needs.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2009
Comment from QuietMtnSunrise
Cool! It is so true that humans have that constant needing in their hearts. I think being loved is definitely the most common that everyone experiences, but it will always disappoint until we find the One who is perfect love. Great poem.
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Cool! It is so true that humans have that constant needing in their hearts. I think being loved is definitely the most common that everyone experiences, but it will always disappoint until we find the One who is perfect love. Great poem.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2009