CSP: A Collection of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 42 "Tangible Hope"A collection of poetry
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Comment from DreamChaser
I love the entire poem, but the last line "He gave me breath once more", is truly breathtakingly beautiful. It shows that love can conquer all our fears and reservations.
Wonderful and uplifting. The artwork compliments the verse well.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2009
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I love the entire poem, but the last line "He gave me breath once more", is truly breathtakingly beautiful. It shows that love can conquer all our fears and reservations.
Wonderful and uplifting. The artwork compliments the verse well.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2009
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DreamChaser, makes me so happy to know how much you liked that line! Thank you so much for your great review. So encouraging. And thanks for commenting on the artwork, as well. With warmest regards, Sue
Comment from c_lucas
I like the physical and the spirtitual essence of this well written poem. It has a smooth flow of words that makes for a very easy read. There is excellent imagery and descriptive scheme.
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I like the physical and the spirtitual essence of this well written poem. It has a smooth flow of words that makes for a very easy read. There is excellent imagery and descriptive scheme.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2009
Comment from fayesh
Sorry to hear you were ill. Your poem was nicely written. The rhymes were not forced and the ending was the best part of the poem - rising from a state of "death" like Lazarus - all because of love.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2009
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Sorry to hear you were ill. Your poem was nicely written. The rhymes were not forced and the ending was the best part of the poem - rising from a state of "death" like Lazarus - all because of love.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2009
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Fayesh, your review is beautiful. Thank you for your most kind words. So glad you enjoyed this piece. With warmest regards, Sue
Comment from Firefly54
I was beginning to think that people stopped taking holidays, once they became addicted to this site... Hope you had a good time, you'll be expected to make two posts a day to make up for it.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2009
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I was beginning to think that people stopped taking holidays, once they became addicted to this site... Hope you had a good time, you'll be expected to make two posts a day to make up for it.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2009
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Ha! Funny you should say that because when one stops writing, there is a backup quota that just HAS to come out! So, I'm now playing catch-up. HA! Thanks for your great (and fun) review. Sue :-))
Comment from Brandenpaul
Hope you're feeling better and it was nothing serious. I enjoyed this piece, took a message of being strong and perserveering. Thought the pic was an interesting choice but complimented nicely.
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Hope you're feeling better and it was nothing serious. I enjoyed this piece, took a message of being strong and perserveering. Thought the pic was an interesting choice but complimented nicely.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2009
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
This is a first-rate piece
of verse, with the words
and both rhythm and rhyme
running smoothly throughout.
A real pleasure to review.
Margaret.
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This is a first-rate piece
of verse, with the words
and both rhythm and rhyme
running smoothly throughout.
A real pleasure to review.
Margaret.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2009
Comment from bkrighter
I hope you are feeling better. This is a good poem about finding someone who gives or, at least, sparks hope. Hope, of course, can be found in many different places and a single poem should not try to catalog them all.
Be well.
Steve
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I hope you are feeling better. This is a good poem about finding someone who gives or, at least, sparks hope. Hope, of course, can be found in many different places and a single poem should not try to catalog them all.
Be well.
Steve
Comment Written 24-Feb-2009
Comment from Minglement
Oh, this is marvelous. Simply beautiful and uplifting. It makes my heart sing! Just loved the lines,
'Clouds emptied with the rain
The sun no longer in eclipse'
Sorry you haven't been well. Take care of you - you're the only you we've got!
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Oh, this is marvelous. Simply beautiful and uplifting. It makes my heart sing! Just loved the lines,
'Clouds emptied with the rain
The sun no longer in eclipse'
Sorry you haven't been well. Take care of you - you're the only you we've got!
Comment Written 24-Feb-2009
Comment from Arkine
This is a wonderful poem, lots of images conveyed. It's been a while, but I still have memories of when I first started to feel love for my husband...don't take that wrong I love him now. But in the beginning it's hard to trust, to give. Great job!
Hope you get to feeling better soon! :)
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This is a wonderful poem, lots of images conveyed. It's been a while, but I still have memories of when I first started to feel love for my husband...don't take that wrong I love him now. But in the beginning it's hard to trust, to give. Great job!
Hope you get to feeling better soon! :)
Comment Written 24-Feb-2009
Comment from Carol D Parker
This is excellent. You really presented the truth about love in such lovely language. Your verses are arranged just right and you painted a picture that I could almost see. You did a great job here. Sincerely
Delora
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This is excellent. You really presented the truth about love in such lovely language. Your verses are arranged just right and you painted a picture that I could almost see. You did a great job here. Sincerely
Delora
Comment Written 24-Feb-2009