CSP: A Collection of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 45 "The Golden Rule"A collection of poetry
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Comment from SteveI
You are exceptionally gifted to have started in November and have progressed to write such wonderful works of the pen. You should be very pleased and proud. I admire your discipline and talent to stay within a structural form yet write so freely. Very impressive.
I enjoy reading your work and I am glad you stuck around.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2009
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You are exceptionally gifted to have started in November and have progressed to write such wonderful works of the pen. You should be very pleased and proud. I admire your discipline and talent to stay within a structural form yet write so freely. Very impressive.
I enjoy reading your work and I am glad you stuck around.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2009
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Stevel, the desire to write has always been there, but I could never have believed I would actually do it. Once I came here to FS, I have learned so much from everyone here. And a lot of study. Thank you for your great review and compliments. Sue
Comment from debskatz
Hey Sue,
I love it! And all the words were used properly! lol Truly a very good description of kindness. Thanks for sharing it with us.
smiles,
deb
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2009
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Hey Sue,
I love it! And all the words were used properly! lol Truly a very good description of kindness. Thanks for sharing it with us.
smiles,
deb
Comment Written 18-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2009
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deb, so glad you enjoyed this one! I do love the rictameter. Thanks so much for your very kind review and compliments. Sue :-))
Comment from glacierbabe
Thank you for explaining a rictameter. I am just learning about poetry and your explanation is appreciated. After reading your notes, I went back and read the poem again. Wonderfully written. The sentiment is excellent and well portrayed. Now if everyone just followed it. :)
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2009
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Thank you for explaining a rictameter. I am just learning about poetry and your explanation is appreciated. After reading your notes, I went back and read the poem again. Wonderfully written. The sentiment is excellent and well portrayed. Now if everyone just followed it. :)
Comment Written 18-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2009
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glacierbabe, so glad you read the notes on the rictameter. If you're just learning poetry, this is a great one to work with. Is an excellent exercise in being very selective with word choices for all your poetry. Thank you for your great review and compliments. With regards, Sue
Comment from skye
Happiness spread around, everyone being kind and pleasant.
Your poem follows the poetic structure and form nicely.
I like the ideas you presented.
Very well done.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2009
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Happiness spread around, everyone being kind and pleasant.
Your poem follows the poetic structure and form nicely.
I like the ideas you presented.
Very well done.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2009
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skye, thank you for your lovely comments. And for your very generous review. Always appreciated, Sue
Comment from QuietMtnSunrise
I really like this poem. Very unique style and combination of syllables requiring thought for every word choice. I can see why you received 6 stars on this one. Excellente!
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2009
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I really like this poem. Very unique style and combination of syllables requiring thought for every word choice. I can see why you received 6 stars on this one. Excellente!
Comment Written 18-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2009
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This is why I do love the rictameter. Excellent practice to ensure each word is solid. Thank you very much for your very kind review and compliments. With regards, Sue
Comment from RapturedHeart
Very well done!! I like 'exercising humanity' - this is the kind of workout we need most! And, you are so very right - this is extremely contagious. Yet, it only takes one little frown to stop its flow. Guess that's why we need so many reminders:). This was a great idea for a rictameter. Take care,
Heather
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2009
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Very well done!! I like 'exercising humanity' - this is the kind of workout we need most! And, you are so very right - this is extremely contagious. Yet, it only takes one little frown to stop its flow. Guess that's why we need so many reminders:). This was a great idea for a rictameter. Take care,
Heather
Comment Written 18-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2009
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Heather, thank you again for your most kind review. I appreciate your very "close reads" of poetry. Yes, we do need a 'workout'! Ha! With warmest regards, Sue
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Sue....this is a great rictameter. I always forget about this poetry form until I read one. You did a fine job with this one. the message is just wonderful....blessings....chey
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2009
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Hi Sue....this is a great rictameter. I always forget about this poetry form until I read one. You did a fine job with this one. the message is just wonderful....blessings....chey
Comment Written 18-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2009
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Chey, so glad you enjoyed this rictameter. I do love to write them. Thank you for your very kind review and comments. With regards, Sue
Comment from Arkine
A little kindness does go a long way. If we could all do one thing for one other person, that would be interesting to see now wouldn't it? This poem just gives us a gentle reminder. Great job! :)
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A little kindness does go a long way. If we could all do one thing for one other person, that would be interesting to see now wouldn't it? This poem just gives us a gentle reminder. Great job! :)
Comment Written 18-Feb-2009
Comment from mermaids
You state the truth, kindness spreads good will. Thank for the info on the rictameter, I wasn't aware of this form of poetry and it is great to learn about other forms of poetry.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2009
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You state the truth, kindness spreads good will. Thank for the info on the rictameter, I wasn't aware of this form of poetry and it is great to learn about other forms of poetry.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2009
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I think I may sponsor a contest today on the rictameter. It is a great way to exercise word choices in poetry. I highly recommend it. And they are fun! Thanks so much for your great review. With regards, Sue
Comment from mushroom
it makes me smile this poem, i feel it's quite soft content, spreading goodwill, that's what it's about, a very polished way to say it
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2009
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it makes me smile this poem, i feel it's quite soft content, spreading goodwill, that's what it's about, a very polished way to say it
Comment Written 18-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2009
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mushroom, thanks so much for your lovely review and comments. Very much appreciated. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Sue
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you're welcome