CSP: A Collection of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 46 "An Unexpected Smile"A collection of poetry
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Comment from G.B. Smith
My memories of past are all ignored
as I return your smile, I'm pink with blush
My hardened, tempered heart has taken flight
now melted by your beckoning delight
Everyone who knows me, knows that I an a sucker for a love poem. This was even better than that. In my estimation, this was written by a true romance poet.
Bear
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2009
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My memories of past are all ignored
as I return your smile, I'm pink with blush
My hardened, tempered heart has taken flight
now melted by your beckoning delight
Everyone who knows me, knows that I an a sucker for a love poem. This was even better than that. In my estimation, this was written by a true romance poet.
Bear
Comment Written 20-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2009
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Glen Bear, I'm a sucker for a love poem, also. Especially, the sonnet! I am so happy you enjoyed this. Thank you very much for your highest review of this poem. I am truly honored. You've made my day!! Very much appreciated, Sue :-))
Comment from CameoRenae
Well Done! This was a well written Romantic English Sonnet. It had a really nice flow, and the words were touching.
Great job!
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Well Done! This was a well written Romantic English Sonnet. It had a really nice flow, and the words were touching.
Great job!
Comment Written 20-Feb-2009
Comment from P1
hey sue
great sonnet you got the hang of this
really well. beats me lol
good luck in the contest, should
so well. hugs lynda.
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hey sue
great sonnet you got the hang of this
really well. beats me lol
good luck in the contest, should
so well. hugs lynda.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2009
Comment from Brandenpaul
I would like to say I've had enough of the romantic stuff, now that Valentine's is over; but I don't think I can. I thought this was very romantic, but not mushy! What a simple smile can do depending on who it's from. Very nice presentation.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2009
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I would like to say I've had enough of the romantic stuff, now that Valentine's is over; but I don't think I can. I thought this was very romantic, but not mushy! What a simple smile can do depending on who it's from. Very nice presentation.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2009
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Thanks for commenting that it wasn't 'mushy'. Didn't want to go there. Just all in the "smile" and the chemistry was there. Thanks very much for your great review and compliments. With regards, Sue
Comment from Gramma Kathy
This certainly is romantic! Your sonnet does have a Shakespearean feel to it, adding to the allure.
I love the artwork you chose, as well as the background and font colors. They complement the poem perfectly.
Well done!
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This certainly is romantic! Your sonnet does have a Shakespearean feel to it, adding to the allure.
I love the artwork you chose, as well as the background and font colors. They complement the poem perfectly.
Well done!
Comment Written 19-Feb-2009
Comment from Bryana
This is absolutely lovely.
Well written sonnet. The
rhyme, rhythm and flow are
beautiful.
I love this line ...
My hardened tempered heart has taken flight
Even though mine has not taken flight yet! LOL
Good luck in the contest.
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This is absolutely lovely.
Well written sonnet. The
rhyme, rhythm and flow are
beautiful.
I love this line ...
My hardened tempered heart has taken flight
Even though mine has not taken flight yet! LOL
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2009
Comment from MJMuraco
Sue,, your poem is beautiful and flows perfectly. It shows a lot of emotion and your artwork that you chose and presentation are excellent.
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Sue,, your poem is beautiful and flows perfectly. It shows a lot of emotion and your artwork that you chose and presentation are excellent.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2009
Comment from volunteer angel
Sonnets are not easy to write. You have done a perfect job on this one. Smiles do make the heart leap and it makes a wonderful topic! The rhymes were well done! Good luck in the contest! V.A.
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Sonnets are not easy to write. You have done a perfect job on this one. Smiles do make the heart leap and it makes a wonderful topic! The rhymes were well done! Good luck in the contest! V.A.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2009
Comment from whizpurr ^-^
Yes, dear kiddo, this one is really, really, really romantic. Who could help but be charmed by it. Excellent in form and delightful to read. Thanks for sharing.
Sincerely,
Whizpurr ^-^
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Yes, dear kiddo, this one is really, really, really romantic. Who could help but be charmed by it. Excellent in form and delightful to read. Thanks for sharing.
Sincerely,
Whizpurr ^-^
Comment Written 19-Feb-2009
Comment from azbukivedi
We've had some terrific sonnets on this site lately - and mostly romantic at that. While most romantic poetry is mush, this is actually pretty good. I liked the metaphors and the hope in it. Good luck with the contest!
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We've had some terrific sonnets on this site lately - and mostly romantic at that. While most romantic poetry is mush, this is actually pretty good. I liked the metaphors and the hope in it. Good luck with the contest!
Comment Written 19-Feb-2009