CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from elainec4
Sixteezkid,
Ain't that the truth!! Well said--especially within the parameters of this form. Enjoyed reading. elaine
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Sixteezkid,
Ain't that the truth!! Well said--especially within the parameters of this form. Enjoyed reading. elaine
Comment Written 12-Feb-2009
Comment from Judian James
It's the afterwards that is all too discerning if not the answer you're both looking for at the time. Well done and true in the throes of passion.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2009
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It's the afterwards that is all too discerning if not the answer you're both looking for at the time. Well done and true in the throes of passion.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2009
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Agreed! It is the afterwards. Thanks much for your comments and very kind review. Sue
Comment from Cedar
I love the words you have chosen for this short piece. They really deliver. It makes me want to grab the wife for a little afternoon delight.
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I love the words you have chosen for this short piece. They really deliver. It makes me want to grab the wife for a little afternoon delight.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2009
Comment from bluefly
Hi Sue,
This is a nicely crafted and well structured poem in this style. You do a good job of painting a strong word picture of making love. Nicely done Scott
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Hi Sue,
This is a nicely crafted and well structured poem in this style. You do a good job of painting a strong word picture of making love. Nicely done Scott
Comment Written 12-Feb-2009
Comment from Donovan
I think not knowing the difference between lust and love in the moment of truth is exactly why I am where I am in life and it is all clear to me that instant gratification is probably a poor substitute until the next time.
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I think not knowing the difference between lust and love in the moment of truth is exactly why I am where I am in life and it is all clear to me that instant gratification is probably a poor substitute until the next time.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2009
Comment from Perp Ihebom
This is exactly true. At that moment when passion seizes the whole being, rational thinking is not usually possible. You captured the feeling very well. kudos
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This is exactly true. At that moment when passion seizes the whole being, rational thinking is not usually possible. You captured the feeling very well. kudos
Comment Written 12-Feb-2009
Comment from Jazh
I like this one. You've managed to capture that moment when all reason deserts people. I particularly like the last line, with its alliteration. Good luck with the contest. :)
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I like this one. You've managed to capture that moment when all reason deserts people. I particularly like the last line, with its alliteration. Good luck with the contest. :)
Comment Written 11-Feb-2009
Comment from Graceland42
Very lovely, and very true. Succintly expressed. Sometimes it is hard to tell the difference between love and lust, and in the beginning, at least, it doesn't seem to matter.
Warm regards,
Julianna
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Very lovely, and very true. Succintly expressed. Sometimes it is hard to tell the difference between love and lust, and in the beginning, at least, it doesn't seem to matter.
Warm regards,
Julianna
Comment Written 11-Feb-2009
Comment from Oatmeal
SIXTEEZKID,
Been there. Done that! LOL I liked this one very very much! The theme was good. Well chosen words and colorful arrangement and very well decorated thoughts.
There were no errors to be found.
Your feelings are very understandable and expressed through the poem.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2009
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SIXTEEZKID,
Been there. Done that! LOL I liked this one very very much! The theme was good. Well chosen words and colorful arrangement and very well decorated thoughts.
There were no errors to be found.
Your feelings are very understandable and expressed through the poem.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 11-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2009
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Oatmeal,
What an honor to receive your highest review! You've made my day! I am so glad you liked this piece. And your compliments are so appreciated! Thank you very much.
Most sincerely,
Sue
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Sue,
I always tell the truth. I am very honest and I have almost been thrown off of this site many times because of my honesty! LOL
The poem was wonderful! very well done.
Love you,
Oatmeal
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LOL!! Storm the Bastille!! HA!!!!
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Sue,
You are too funny! LOL
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment from Adri7enne
Yeah, when you're there, you don't analyse the reasons. Lust is as good as love, just then. In French we say: Le coeur a ses raisons, que la raison ne connait pas." It means, "The heart has its reasons,and it has nothing to do with rationality."
What can I say? I love a love poem that starts off with "Lust". Loved it.
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Yeah, when you're there, you don't analyse the reasons. Lust is as good as love, just then. In French we say: Le coeur a ses raisons, que la raison ne connait pas." It means, "The heart has its reasons,and it has nothing to do with rationality."
What can I say? I love a love poem that starts off with "Lust". Loved it.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2009