CSP: A Collection of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 56 "Freedom Realized"A collection of poetry
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Comment from dportwood
I like the way this poem rolls along. The sonnet style has become one of my favorites. Enjoyable message and a pleasure to have read.
Duane
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2009
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I like the way this poem rolls along. The sonnet style has become one of my favorites. Enjoyable message and a pleasure to have read.
Duane
Comment Written 11-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2009
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Duane, the sonnet does sound so nice, doesn't it. So glad you liked this poem. Thanks very much for your kind review. Sue
Comment from honeytree
It would be great to acheive such feats.Your writing here was very enjoyable to read and the picture is beautifully presented and suits the words written as well.
These are dreams but good dreams I bet.
I loved evryword written here.
Honeytree.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2009
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It would be great to acheive such feats.Your writing here was very enjoyable to read and the picture is beautifully presented and suits the words written as well.
These are dreams but good dreams I bet.
I loved evryword written here.
Honeytree.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2009
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Honeytree, so glad to hear from you. So sorry what you and everybody is going through in Victoria. Tragic. So glad you're safe. Thank you for your lovely compliments. Glad you enjoyed this poem. And thanks for your very kind review. With warm regards, Sue
Comment from Hitcher
Dreams and the power of achieving them, I think you did a great job of the iambic pentameter[it read very smooth] I think a lot will relate to your words friend, the dreams that got away[did we run out of time or did we aim to high] I makes one ponder, I achieved a lot of mine but not all, not by a long shot, do I still have time? I hope so. Nice touch with the artwork!
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2009
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Dreams and the power of achieving them, I think you did a great job of the iambic pentameter[it read very smooth] I think a lot will relate to your words friend, the dreams that got away[did we run out of time or did we aim to high] I makes one ponder, I achieved a lot of mine but not all, not by a long shot, do I still have time? I hope so. Nice touch with the artwork!
Comment Written 10-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2009
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Oh, yeah...you've got plenty of time! Especially with Hitch's attitude :-)) Thanks so much for your very kind review. Your friend, Sue
Comment from Domino
hi, Sue
Excellent meter in sonnet format without the rhyme scheme restrictions. Wonderful dreams of successful adventures.
No way am I tryin Everest. Blimey, the Eiger an the Mattehorn' were my limit. It was great fun hand-gliding down, too (without the advantage of a sail). Original, entertaining and profound. Love, ray xx
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2009
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hi, Sue
Excellent meter in sonnet format without the rhyme scheme restrictions. Wonderful dreams of successful adventures.
No way am I tryin Everest. Blimey, the Eiger an the Mattehorn' were my limit. It was great fun hand-gliding down, too (without the advantage of a sail). Original, entertaining and profound. Love, ray xx
Comment Written 10-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2009
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Tell me you're kidding about hang-gliding!! U serious??
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Course I was lyin - I free-fell from the top of both peaks, without the aid of a parachute, and landed in a bucket of water ta stop my fall. ;-) xx
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Hell, I don't know what you got up to in your youth! You had me!! HA! So glad my mentor loves this poem. Susie now has big smile on her face :-))
Comment from fictionwriter
I love the message of this poem. It shows what we can do when we really put our mind to it. I know that we can do whatever we desire. Great poem.
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I love the message of this poem. It shows what we can do when we really put our mind to it. I know that we can do whatever we desire. Great poem.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2009
Comment from Loyd C. Taylor, Sr
Hello Sue and what an awesome and inspiring poem and very well written. I loved your choice in artwork, the colors and the great message. A good closing line! Loyd
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2009
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Hello Sue and what an awesome and inspiring poem and very well written. I loved your choice in artwork, the colors and the great message. A good closing line! Loyd
Comment Written 10-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2009
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Loyd, so glad you like this bit of me pretending I've conquered Mt. Everest! HA! Thanks for your very kind words and review. With regards, Sue
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I'm glad we still can make believe as well, Loyd
Comment from debskatz
Hey Sue,
Nice one! I sure as the devil wouldn't be climbing Mt. Everest. Not in this lifetime, anyway! But you've given me an idea for a poem. Hummm... I'll have to see.
Anyway, great poem & nicely written. Thanks for sharing it with us!
smiles,
deb
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2009
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Hey Sue,
Nice one! I sure as the devil wouldn't be climbing Mt. Everest. Not in this lifetime, anyway! But you've given me an idea for a poem. Hummm... I'll have to see.
Anyway, great poem & nicely written. Thanks for sharing it with us!
smiles,
deb
Comment Written 10-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2009
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Not in my lifetime either! HA!! If I had a second go at life, I'd be an adventurer, but now I just "wish". Thanks so much for your great review. Always appreciated, Sue :-))
Comment from rmdelta
Sue,
this was an inspirational writing, my friend, because in dreams, we can do anything at all. I've dreamed of so many things, as have we all, and have been both happy and frightened upon waking up to remember what I just dreamed. Imagine the same for you. great idea for your poem.
Reggie
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2009
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Sue,
this was an inspirational writing, my friend, because in dreams, we can do anything at all. I've dreamed of so many things, as have we all, and have been both happy and frightened upon waking up to remember what I just dreamed. Imagine the same for you. great idea for your poem.
Reggie
Comment Written 10-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2009
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I dreamed in magnificent color last week. Love when that happens. The sky was a blue I could never describe. (No, I wasn't on LSD) Ha!! Thank you for your generous review. Always appreciated, Sue
Comment from Roisin
What a wonderful poem, Sue. I love the words you've used and the beautiful way you've formed them into a beautiful sonnet. Your rhymes are perfect and the meter is great. Great job.
Warm regards.
Roisin
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2009
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What a wonderful poem, Sue. I love the words you've used and the beautiful way you've formed them into a beautiful sonnet. Your rhymes are perfect and the meter is great. Great job.
Warm regards.
Roisin
Comment Written 10-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2009
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Roisin, so glad you liked this poem. Thanks for your compliments and very kind review. Much appreciated, Sue
Comment from NightWriter
"Freedom Realized" is a beautifully written poem filled with hope and endless bravery. Perfectly written with a nice easy to read flow and rhythm. So this is an iambic pentameter. Well done
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2009
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"Freedom Realized" is a beautifully written poem filled with hope and endless bravery. Perfectly written with a nice easy to read flow and rhythm. So this is an iambic pentameter. Well done
Comment Written 10-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2009
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NightWriter, love the way you wrote "hope and endless bravery". With that combination, there's nothing we cannot achieve. Thank you for your very kind compliments and review. With regards, Sue