Comment from Minglement

Excellent

What a lovely approach to the short love poem contest. Very 'lyrical' (sorry, I couldn't resist) and just flowed nicely. Great theme and illustration. Good luck.

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Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Now, I a higher note. Short and sweet! It always amazes me about much substance can be communicated in a story of very few words. I enjoyed the musical "bridge" metaphor and the rhyme as well as the perfect picture and colors. The title was very appealing also.

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2009

Comment from Counting Carrots

Good

This is a good poem in itself, but I didn't really feel the element of love, which is part of the competitions requirement...

But a good poem all the same :)

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 Comment Written 13-Jan-2009

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2009

I'm sorry you didn't get the metaphor of harmony. And the bridge to the chorus. A lot of love there! Anyway, I really appreciate your reading and reviewing, With regards, Sue

Comment from Dreamdancer

Excellent

Hello my friend,
Wonderful presentation that compliments the words of the poem. Great imagery and flow... What more could you ask for... Good luck with the contest my friend.... Dreamdancer

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Comment from fastdigits

Excellent

An outstanding presentation,
from the sheet music with the
notes on it to accompany the
words of music " a bridge,",
the tempo of your poem, the
melody it sings in just a
few words and the harmony of
the art work with your entire
presentation; priceless.
Well done

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Comment from Jazh

Excellent

A very nice poem, Sue. I particularly enjoyed it as a musician! I like "A chorus bridge/for us to cross" - just a good amount of alliteration there. Good luck with the contest. :)

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Comment from Roisin

Excellent

This is wonderful. Such few words, such beautiful words. You have come up with something original and lovely. You have a great entry here for the contest.

Warm regards.

Roisin

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Comment from joan marie

Excellent

This brings back the days of the metronome and forced practice while I could hear my friends outside. I love the little short ones that say so much. Good luck. joan marie

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Comment from Josipher32

Excellent

I ABSOLUTELY loved this poem. The comparison to love with music was a wonderful comparison. LOVED the ending. Great JOB!

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2009

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2009

Josipher, thank you so much! Thank you for your great review and compliments! :-)) Sue

Comment from Curt Mongold

Excellent

Very nice metaphor in the work cuz! I like the analogy very much, mainly because I love music so much. Very easy to identify with on many levels.
Great stuff and best wishes!
Sincerely,
Cuzzin Curt

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2009