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CSP: A Collection of Poems

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A collection of poetry

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Comment from Sissy Holly Grace
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Interesting thoughts in this clever little poem. the vocabulary is good contained many interesting views in the two stanza's. Very good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2009

Comment from Poetic Friend
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I don't think there is anything wrong with being a deep thinker. The more we think and ask, the more we learn. Never stop philosophizing. Philosophers may great poets.

Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2009

reply by the author on 10-Jan-2009
    I can't help that I'm curious just about on everything. I have to know how a crankshaft works or how many pounds of thrust it takes to shoot our space shuttle up to break gravity and ponder man's existence. Yep, love philosophizing. So many fantastic possibilities to the whats and hows. Thanks for reviewing, Poetic Friend. Really appreciate it. Sue
Comment from Brian S. Pratt
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There's much to ponder and I yearn
To understand what, how and why.
I need to think it through, is all
--well done. enjoyed it.

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2009

reply by the author on 10-Jan-2009
    Glad you enjoyed this, Brian. Thank you very much for your review! Sue
Comment from dportwood
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You have quite nicely met the contest requirements in this poem. The rhyming pattern has to be a challenge which you have mastered very well.

Duane

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2009

reply by the author on 09-Jan-2009
    Thank you, Duane! Very nice compliment. I appreciate your review. :-)) Sue
Comment from justmade
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I used to do that too, until someone said something about me being cynical. I am not sure that was the case I just wanted to know enough so I don't keep coming back every time for more detail. I question things a lot especially if I am very interested in them but I had to reduce that a bit because some weren't very comfortable with that.
I love how you expressed that in your poem, very well done.
Much love,
Justmade.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2009

reply by the author on 09-Jan-2009
    I can be cynical, but I just that's not all I think about. I just wonder and ponder and AM curious as a cat! HA! Thanks so much for your great review and compliments. :-)) Sue
Comment from Curt Mongold
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What would Freud say? Who cares? He was a momma's boy who had an Oedipus complex! Glad to see you trying new things cuz. It makes me smile to think how far you've come in such a short time.
Great entry into the contest. It is not my favorite rhyme scheme though!
Best wishes,
Curt

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2009

reply by the author on 09-Jan-2009
    It hasn't been the most popular contest in the hood, and I almost didn't sign up. But, since I'm "HOOKED ON CONTESTS" right now, I went and done it. Happy I did. I had my say!! HA! So, I'll give this to all my family and friends to tell them to leave me alone about it! Ha! Thanks for the review, Cuz. And for your most excellent compliment!...Sue
Comment from Hitcher
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I have never seen anyhing like this before friend, looks and feels like two free verse stanzas to me Sue, lucky for you, you are rather good with the free verse friend. You did a great job of the... whatever it is you want to call it style wise, I'll have to analyze it a while longer! ha ha

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2009

reply by the author on 09-Jan-2009
    Yeah, it's been a contest that I didn't have much interest in entering. But, sat down and within 30 minutes, had it banged out. I rather enjoyed it. There is no name for it that I saw. Anyway, thanks very much for your review! Suc
Comment from Jazh
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I really enjoyed this, Sue, both form and content. Your rhythm and rhymes are excellent. I particularly like: "The world is full, so much to learn" - so true. Good luck with the contest. :)

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2009

reply by the author on 09-Jan-2009
    Thanks for your great review, Jazh! And for highlighting the line you liked. Much appreciated...Sue
Comment from Judian James
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Considering the topic you chose, the rhyme scheme is a perfect match because you cause the reader to "over-analyze" and try to figure out where you're going. very clever and very good as well.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2009

reply by the author on 09-Jan-2009
    I saw this contest for a few days and didn't consider it. However, saw it again, and thought, "Why not?". I enjoyed writing it because it allowed me to "justify" my over-thinking! HA! Thanks for your review and very kind remarks. :-)) Sue
Comment from chaswriter
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Sue - I enjoy reading your poems and this one is quite good with its message and and rhythm. Don't how you do it but I like the read. Charlie

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2009

reply by the author on 09-Jan-2009
    Hey Charlie, thanks so much for this very kind review! And I appreciate you saying you like reading my poems. A TOP compliment! With regards, Sue