CSP: A Collection of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 115 "Liquidity"A collection of poetry
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Comment from Curt Mongold
In this case the flow is greater going out than coming in! Like all cash flows! Great little contest entry cuz! I like the way thye message is delivered with that twist of ironic comedy. Nice touch!
Curt
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In this case the flow is greater going out than coming in! Like all cash flows! Great little contest entry cuz! I like the way thye message is delivered with that twist of ironic comedy. Nice touch!
Curt
Comment Written 03-Jan-2009
Comment from dinamyc
This poem meets the requirements of the contest, as well as having the satirical twist at the end. I didn't notice any errors. Good job.
Dinamyc
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2009
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This poem meets the requirements of the contest, as well as having the satirical twist at the end. I didn't notice any errors. Good job.
Dinamyc
Comment Written 03-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2009
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Thank you for your review and comments. Sue
Comment from RapturedHeart
Ha! Another hilarious Epigram - these are great! I was looking over the entries for the contest and just finished having a good laugh over S.Yocom's - now yours has me starting up again! Hear, hear!! Amen and amen. Thought this was extremely clever and great punning. All the best in the contest,
Heather
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2009
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Ha! Another hilarious Epigram - these are great! I was looking over the entries for the contest and just finished having a good laugh over S.Yocom's - now yours has me starting up again! Hear, hear!! Amen and amen. Thought this was extremely clever and great punning. All the best in the contest,
Heather
Comment Written 03-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2009
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Heather, these are fun! Yes, I read Yocom's and cracked up!! Tough competition out there on this one! Thanks for your great review. :-)) Sue
Comment from rmdelta
Sue,
What a great poem, my friend and a great contest entry as well. Yep, the true meaning of cash flow is my money going somewhere or to someone I don't even know. lol Well done and good luck in the contest.
REggie
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Sue,
What a great poem, my friend and a great contest entry as well. Yep, the true meaning of cash flow is my money going somewhere or to someone I don't even know. lol Well done and good luck in the contest.
REggie
Comment Written 03-Jan-2009
Comment from Domino
Morning, Sue
I wondered what happened ta my wallet, LOL!
Your poem 'flows' as well as your 'cash'. Very funny and clever play on words. Good luck and best wishes, Ray xx
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Morning, Sue
I wondered what happened ta my wallet, LOL!
Your poem 'flows' as well as your 'cash'. Very funny and clever play on words. Good luck and best wishes, Ray xx
Comment Written 03-Jan-2009
Comment from Helen Tan
The content of this poems ties in with the title "Liquidity", well done.
Where did the money go?
Sounds like you need an auditor.
Ahhh! The meaning of cash flow.
This is a witty line and a great way of answering the question of where the money went to. The twist is well presented here, liquidity as in having liquid assets e.g. cash yet you are presenting a non-liquid situation, no cash!
cash flow - the choice of the word "flow" is excellent, liquid does indeed flow!
From an ex auditor and accountant, bravo. You do understand your book-keeping lingo.
All the best for the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2009
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The content of this poems ties in with the title "Liquidity", well done.
Where did the money go?
Sounds like you need an auditor.
Ahhh! The meaning of cash flow.
This is a witty line and a great way of answering the question of where the money went to. The twist is well presented here, liquidity as in having liquid assets e.g. cash yet you are presenting a non-liquid situation, no cash!
cash flow - the choice of the word "flow" is excellent, liquid does indeed flow!
From an ex auditor and accountant, bravo. You do understand your book-keeping lingo.
All the best for the contest.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2009
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Helen, I loved your review with all the interpretations you observed. All were correct. How could it not be if you are an accountant?!!! Ha!!
I don't know if you ever saw Woody Allen's movie, "Manhattan", but it's worth renting it just to see one small scene. He's in a grocery store with his friend, telling him how bad his personal financial situation is. He is confused by all his accountants terms and at the end, says "something's not flowing". Cracks me up even if I see it 100 times! HA!
Thanks so much for your most generous review. So much appreciated,
Sue
Comment from Eternal Muse
Oh, how adorable... I am still laughing. "Liquidity"? That is an ingenious take on the matter. And I just love "cash flow". Yes, the cash definitely flowed out of the wallet. A clever and witty epigram (isn't it a great form?), that has a sustained release quality, and is going to stay with a reader for a long time.
Good luck in the contest - this one sounds like a winner.
Fondly, Yelena
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Oh, how adorable... I am still laughing. "Liquidity"? That is an ingenious take on the matter. And I just love "cash flow". Yes, the cash definitely flowed out of the wallet. A clever and witty epigram (isn't it a great form?), that has a sustained release quality, and is going to stay with a reader for a long time.
Good luck in the contest - this one sounds like a winner.
Fondly, Yelena
Comment Written 03-Jan-2009
Comment from logancane
a very clever poam and creative too.
I don't think it needs any more improvements, it's a thoroughly enjoyable poam.
When I first read I thought of allternitive endings but it finished quite well.
Very Good 5 Stars for me!!!
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2009
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a very clever poam and creative too.
I don't think it needs any more improvements, it's a thoroughly enjoyable poam.
When I first read I thought of allternitive endings but it finished quite well.
Very Good 5 Stars for me!!!
Comment Written 03-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2009
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Thanks so much for your great review! And for all your comments. Am so glad you liked it. With warm regards, Sue
Comment from raimie
lol, truer words were never spoken. I think you have written the epigram for a nation. Wonderfully done. Witty and truthful all in one shot.
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reply by the author on 03-Jan-2009
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lol, truer words were never spoken. I think you have written the epigram for a nation. Wonderfully done. Witty and truthful all in one shot.
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Comment Written 03-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2009
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Truthfulness is always the funniest! HA!! Don't we all just love to laugh at ourselves! Thanks so much for this most generous review and great comments. With regards, Sue
Comment from Jenia
You said it. You told a complete story in just a few lines. It is truly an enjoyable read. I wish I had six stars but I'm all used up and only allowed five. Good luck and keep 'em coming.
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reply by the author on 03-Jan-2009
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You said it. You told a complete story in just a few lines. It is truly an enjoyable read. I wish I had six stars but I'm all used up and only allowed five. Good luck and keep 'em coming.
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Comment Written 03-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2009
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Grinning from ear-to-ear at this review! So happy you liked it so much. I'll just pretend I have that sixer from you - Ha! Thanks so much! :-)) Sue