CSP: A Collection of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 128 "Was It Good For You?"A collection of poetry
22 total reviews
Comment from Winslow
Dear Sixteen,
Men aren't so dumb, we know when it is real. Women have a marvelous canal, full of fire and when flooded it clenches like hell. Good rhyming with a little bit of erotic arrogance thrown in.
Warm regards,
Winslow
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2008
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Dear Sixteen,
Men aren't so dumb, we know when it is real. Women have a marvelous canal, full of fire and when flooded it clenches like hell. Good rhyming with a little bit of erotic arrogance thrown in.
Warm regards,
Winslow
Comment Written 12-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2008
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And we women know that the men know! The joke is on us all!! HA!! Thanks for the great review...Sue
Comment from chaswriter
Naugthy, naughty Sue - We now know the truth. LOL. What a funny entry. Loved the humor you tell in the satisfaction department. Great rhyme and rhythm. Yes, it was good for me. Charlie.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2008
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Naugthy, naughty Sue - We now know the truth. LOL. What a funny entry. Loved the humor you tell in the satisfaction department. Great rhyme and rhythm. Yes, it was good for me. Charlie.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2008
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LMAO!!!! I'm glad it was good for you, Charlie!! Do you have a cigarette? LOL!! Thanks for the great review! Naughty Sue
Comment from SherryHo
I haven't stopped laughing. So true, so true. Your last stanza paints a very vivd picture. I don't think I'll ever look at a wheel again, without at least smirking. I foresee higher ranking in your future.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2008
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I haven't stopped laughing. So true, so true. Your last stanza paints a very vivd picture. I don't think I'll ever look at a wheel again, without at least smirking. I foresee higher ranking in your future.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2008
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Higher ranking because I've just "slept my way to the top?" - HA!!!!! So funny the very different tone of reviews between men and women (but, of course!). You take that wheel, now...k? LOL! Thanks for the great review. ;-) Sue
Comment from Algernon
HAHA, fun, fun, fun. When you don't play dumb.
Very funny. You may have the wheel, but it's the gear stick you need to get hold of....
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2008
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HAHA, fun, fun, fun. When you don't play dumb.
Very funny. You may have the wheel, but it's the gear stick you need to get hold of....
Comment Written 12-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2008
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LMAO!!!! Now, that's a good one!!! I'll try to remember that next time around-HA!! So glad you stopped by to read my little 'naughty'...And thanks very much for the big 5 stars....seriously, I ain't fakin'.... ;-)
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LOL, are you sure you're not. I taught an ex how to drive********** stick..LOLOL... You had me in fits... almost blew mt hard...........................Drive.
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No, baby...this is the real deal! My soft..........ware was having no glitches as I uploaded....and drove the point home
AHHHHH!!! If this contest isn't over soon, this is all going to turn into cyber-sex!! LMAO!!!!
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HAHAHAHA...
Comment from rmdelta
Sue,
Well, unlike the last one I read, my poor mind had very little trouble getting this one. lol The only question I have is why is she lying on his back? Great poem Sue.
Reggie
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2008
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Sue,
Well, unlike the last one I read, my poor mind had very little trouble getting this one. lol The only question I have is why is she lying on his back? Great poem Sue.
Reggie
Comment Written 12-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2008
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Reggie, I love the way you fake it when you talk about your feeble mind. And the next time around you're honest about the .20 cents!!! HA!! Thanks for the fiver.... ;-) Sue
Comment from Domino
Morning, Sue.
Love it when you take control, babes, and I promise not to fake it, either. Pete only wants it five times a week? - pathetic! LOL. Great fun - the poem I mean. Ray xx
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2008
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Morning, Sue.
Love it when you take control, babes, and I promise not to fake it, either. Pete only wants it five times a week? - pathetic! LOL. Great fun - the poem I mean. Ray xx
Comment Written 12-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2008
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Yeah, Pete's lame!!!! Ha!! A woman's gotta do what a woman's gotta do.... ;-)) Sue
Comment from Curt Mongold
Hey cuz,
You know that's not fair to do that to a guy! LOL!
This is hilarious! My only suggestion would be to keep it in 1st person. The switches from "we" to "I" don't match up. Just remove the first "we" in line one and change the "we're" to "I'm" in line 6.
Great stuff cuz!
Sincerely,
Curt
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2008
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Hey cuz,
You know that's not fair to do that to a guy! LOL!
This is hilarious! My only suggestion would be to keep it in 1st person. The switches from "we" to "I" don't match up. Just remove the first "we" in line one and change the "we're" to "I'm" in line 6.
Great stuff cuz!
Sincerely,
Curt
Comment Written 12-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2008
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Well.......I thought about the tenses, but I was trying to make the "we" to be me and Miss Pussoise! HA!!!!! LMAO!!!! Still change it??? Like I told Hitch, NONE of it's true...it's just a poem! HA!!!!!!! Thanks for your great review and comments. Might reconsider. Cuz Sue
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I would still change it. No one will get the point you are trying to make (I didn't) and it sounds like you are talking about women in general and reverting back to yuorself.
By the way, did you enter this into the contest? It shows you have not, your position is still reserved!
Curt
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I agree with you. I will change it now. It does make it a bit off kilter.
I thought I had selected the 'contest' upon posting. Anyway, I did write Tom and asked him to put it over into the contest. So, I'm sure it will be there soon.
Thanks for hosting this NAUGHTY AND FUN contest!!! You devil, you. You got everyone wound up with the tits and you just had to keep it stirred up! HA!
Whew, gonna get hot in there!!
Thanks for your pointers!
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For such a small pointer, I'm just glad you noticed!! LOL!
And hey, I couldn't help it, I had this poem I wrote, and nowhere to.... ummm...stick it!
Curt
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LMAO!!! You're too much.
I just changed it and it is definitely much better. Even sounds "hotter" with the "I'm" - So thanks for that.
LOL! We should make this contest a Round Robin!!! Wow, wouldn't it get deliciously nasty?!!!
Comment from Hitcher
Someone is COMING out of her shell I'm thinking and I must confess I still have a tear in my eye from laughing. I had visions of when Harry Met Sally and the cafe scene floating around in my head. I like, I like very much, welcome to the Dark-side, ha ha.
TELL ME IT IS NOT TRUE! ha ha
Fun isn't it?
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2008
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Someone is COMING out of her shell I'm thinking and I must confess I still have a tear in my eye from laughing. I had visions of when Harry Met Sally and the cafe scene floating around in my head. I like, I like very much, welcome to the Dark-side, ha ha.
TELL ME IT IS NOT TRUE! ha ha
Fun isn't it?
Comment Written 12-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2008
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I am still a wee bit shy. I WAS going to title it: "Get Ready, Cause Here I Come" (like the old soul song) HA!!!!! But, I just couldn't do it!!! I wasn't sure just how nasty it was going to get, seeings that only Curt was the only one who posted before me. NO!! IT"S NOT TRUE, Silly!! It's just a poem! (tee-hee) Luv ya, Hitch. Thanks for your great review! SUC
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Did you Have fun my friend? that is what is the most important thing of all! I'm betting the answer is YES!
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Why, HELL YES!!!! Ha!!
You're not gonna believe this: Someone gave me a 3 star cause it wasn't dirty enough!! LMAO!!!!! I kid you not. I can see it now. He gets to the second stanza, sees it gettin reeeeal hot and...boom! it's over and he's pissed! LMAO!!!
I mean, honestly, what else can you write after the orgasm? except .... "Uh, honey, can I have a drag off your smoke?"
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That was your first outing friend, I try to give at least four stanzas, the more the merrier when it comes to erotic, you have to take one on a journey of discovery. There is no pleasing some people friend.
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That was your first outing friend, I try to give at least four stanzas, the more the merrier when it comes to erotic, you have to take one on a journey of discovery. There is no pleasing some people friend.
Comment from Pitt
This is great! You have been able to have fun with something that isn't always funny. Especially the faking.
Being a male, I have only too often experienced that fake.
As a good observer you can detect it. Especially when you wait for that squeal.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2008
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This is great! You have been able to have fun with something that isn't always funny. Especially the faking.
Being a male, I have only too often experienced that fake.
As a good observer you can detect it. Especially when you wait for that squeal.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2008
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Glad you liked this fun piece! (pardon the pun! -ha!). And thanks for the great review! Cheers :-) Sue
Comment from Leah H
What a fun poem giving validation to the power of female sexuality - it's honest and playful, levelling the playing field a bit. Well done. -- Leah
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2008
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What a fun poem giving validation to the power of female sexuality - it's honest and playful, levelling the playing field a bit. Well done. -- Leah
Comment Written 11-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2008
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Yeah, thought I'd give 'em a serve! LOL!!! So glad you liked it! Thanks for your very kind review. :-) Sue