CSP: A Collection of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 138 "The feeling's mutual..."A collection of poetry
116 total reviews
Comment from yachtworknz
Brooke-How about that? This was so short I read it, laughed and said "Thats a six" and then saw it was your work. That means in reality this was a blinders on review, well six pack anyway.
It harmanised with me.
Cheers and good job. Made me smile.
Scott
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Brooke-How about that? This was so short I read it, laughed and said "Thats a six" and then saw it was your work. That means in reality this was a blinders on review, well six pack anyway.
It harmanised with me.
Cheers and good job. Made me smile.
Scott
Comment Written 05-Dec-2008
Comment from Journey woman
As I read the words the thought that came into my mind was freedom, to think and interpret as I, an individual. No interruptions or rules.
Good work
Journey Woman
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2008
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As I read the words the thought that came into my mind was freedom, to think and interpret as I, an individual. No interruptions or rules.
Good work
Journey Woman
Comment Written 05-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2008
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That is a very cool thought. Yes, "freedom". Great, positive attitude about this piece! Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts. And for your very generous review. So glad you liked it! With regards, Sue
Comment from KYPollard/El Gato
So true. The canvas is waiting. The artist is waiting. Oh, the possibilities! good job on this poem. A well executed complete message.
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So true. The canvas is waiting. The artist is waiting. Oh, the possibilities! good job on this poem. A well executed complete message.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2008
Comment from sharon fallis
Though while the canvas is barren
and stares, it is the brush that
has your attention.
The brush is the canvas with the
point being on the one end and the
brush being the subject and spectra
on the other. Therefore it is
after the artist who does the painting.
The brush only models and understands
where to control the spectrum.
Very good write., Loved it. Sharon
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Though while the canvas is barren
and stares, it is the brush that
has your attention.
The brush is the canvas with the
point being on the one end and the
brush being the subject and spectra
on the other. Therefore it is
after the artist who does the painting.
The brush only models and understands
where to control the spectrum.
Very good write., Loved it. Sharon
Comment Written 04-Dec-2008
Comment from Jody Hart
I loved this! I will be honest and say I am not an expert of poetry, but when I read this I clearly could see it's meaning. Short and sweet! Short it is, but it doesn't lessen the message at all. I can see this pertaining to other things. For example, a blank screen waiting for the writer to bring it to life....there's my little addition....lol
Great job. I loved it!
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I loved this! I will be honest and say I am not an expert of poetry, but when I read this I clearly could see it's meaning. Short and sweet! Short it is, but it doesn't lessen the message at all. I can see this pertaining to other things. For example, a blank screen waiting for the writer to bring it to life....there's my little addition....lol
Great job. I loved it!
Comment Written 04-Dec-2008
Comment from WordPainter
Perfect nanni form, good concrete language. Wonder if artists get Artist's Block? Sounds like would be a good title or subtitle for your poem. The artwork is perfect for this poem.
Good job,
Lois
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Perfect nanni form, good concrete language. Wonder if artists get Artist's Block? Sounds like would be a good title or subtitle for your poem. The artwork is perfect for this poem.
Good job,
Lois
Comment Written 04-Dec-2008
Comment from Jendowoz
It has a very nice ring to it Sixteezkid. I'm a painter too, but I use pastels, and this is just how I feel at times. A bit like writer's block I guess. It says so much in so little words. The picture is magic, it suits the poem completely. Well done. Good luck with your entry
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It has a very nice ring to it Sixteezkid. I'm a painter too, but I use pastels, and this is just how I feel at times. A bit like writer's block I guess. It says so much in so little words. The picture is magic, it suits the poem completely. Well done. Good luck with your entry
Comment Written 04-Dec-2008
Comment from Vallachi
Empty canvas stares
Blankly back at artist
Wanting to be brushed
By strokes of genius
you took the words right out of my mouth in terms of how I feel about writing lately.
great idea you have here
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Empty canvas stares
Blankly back at artist
Wanting to be brushed
By strokes of genius
you took the words right out of my mouth in terms of how I feel about writing lately.
great idea you have here
Comment Written 04-Dec-2008
Comment from kassey
I don't understand fully all the rules of a naani poem. I have to take it that yu checked before you wrote. It is a really good poem and I am sure it will do well in the contest Kay
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I don't understand fully all the rules of a naani poem. I have to take it that yu checked before you wrote. It is a really good poem and I am sure it will do well in the contest Kay
Comment Written 04-Dec-2008
Comment from honeytree
Empty canvas stares
Blankly back at artist
Wanting to be brushed
By strokes of genius
"I guess the empty canvas
is waiting for someone
to paint or draw or
splash paint on it.
It would feel right at home then."
I liked seeing the brush on the canvas.
I liked your words and we need a little "brush" to start painting. Honeytree.
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Empty canvas stares
Blankly back at artist
Wanting to be brushed
By strokes of genius
"I guess the empty canvas
is waiting for someone
to paint or draw or
splash paint on it.
It would feel right at home then."
I liked seeing the brush on the canvas.
I liked your words and we need a little "brush" to start painting. Honeytree.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2008