A Serendipitous Meeting
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Comment from judiverse
Tyler seems almost too good to be true. He is taking good care of Rebeka, but I believe that's the way he'd treat anyone. Oh, dear, if he has to leave, Rebeka will probably have some kind of emergency. I'm curious to see how she'll handle the situation with her father. He outdoes the Amish in his beliefs. I hope she won't let him continue to force his beliefs on her. Look at Tyler's statement "I'm waiting for you to return the couch." I think something's missing. Seems like it's taking a long time to get that bridge repaired. Great job with this chapter! judi
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2025
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Tyler seems almost too good to be true. He is taking good care of Rebeka, but I believe that's the way he'd treat anyone. Oh, dear, if he has to leave, Rebeka will probably have some kind of emergency. I'm curious to see how she'll handle the situation with her father. He outdoes the Amish in his beliefs. I hope she won't let him continue to force his beliefs on her. Look at Tyler's statement "I'm waiting for you to return the couch." I think something's missing. Seems like it's taking a long time to get that bridge repaired. Great job with this chapter! judi
Comment Written 16-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2025
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So far, the bridge repair has only been 2 days and it's a weekend. Thank you for the kind review. Rebeka's father is an interesting character. We will discover more as the story continues.
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I can't remember whether you had mentioned Rebeka's mother. I am assuming she's dead. You are right--those repairs do take time. My brother lives in Georgia and just got his roof repaired after it had been damaged in a storm several months ago. judi
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Rebeka's mother will enter the story shortly. She will bring another dimension to Rebeka.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Tyler is so attentive towards Rebekah and has seen that she's off to hospital now for a few days to ensure that all is ok. We know so much about Rebekah from your chapter here but still need her character to be fleshed out more, possibly when Tyler speaks to her father. Thank you for sharing your excellent read, Barbara. Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2025
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Tyler is so attentive towards Rebekah and has seen that she's off to hospital now for a few days to ensure that all is ok. We know so much about Rebekah from your chapter here but still need her character to be fleshed out more, possibly when Tyler speaks to her father. Thank you for sharing your excellent read, Barbara. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 16-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2025
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Rebeka is remaining on the ranch and Aunt Beth will come to stay with her. Tyler is off to the hospital because of a 19 car accident. More about will continue to be reviewed. Thank you for the kind revie.
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Sorry to get my facts mixed up, Barbara. I kept re-reading but still got the wrong end of the stick:(
Comment from lyenochka
Well, if we're ever traveling Texas, I sure hope that someone like Dr. Tyler Butler would have an BnB for rent! He is the nicest human being and it's good that Rebeka had stumbled into his area. Getting close to Zeke is definitely a first step for Rebeka and Tyler's relationship!
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2025
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Well, if we're ever traveling Texas, I sure hope that someone like Dr. Tyler Butler would have an BnB for rent! He is the nicest human being and it's good that Rebeka had stumbled into his area. Getting close to Zeke is definitely a first step for Rebeka and Tyler's relationship!
Comment Written 16-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2025
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Yes, Tyler is a really nice person. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from jmdg1954
Great chapter, Barbara.
You've shown Tyler though with her best interests in mind medically, he finally showed that he still is "a guy" and saw her shape and beauty (cleanly$.
I can't wait till they meet the father. That'll be interesting,
Can't wait...
John
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2025
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Great chapter, Barbara.
You've shown Tyler though with her best interests in mind medically, he finally showed that he still is "a guy" and saw her shape and beauty (cleanly$.
I can't wait till they meet the father. That'll be interesting,
Can't wait...
John
Comment Written 16-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2025
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Yes, Tyler is a really nice person. Thank you for the kind review. It's about four weeks until Tyler meets Rebeka's dad. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from patcelaw
Your serendipitous stories are always very interesting to listen to as they flow very well when they're read that. Your sentence structure and your paragraphing is always very well done your punctuation is also very good. Patricia.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2025
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Your serendipitous stories are always very interesting to listen to as they flow very well when they're read that. Your sentence structure and your paragraphing is always very well done your punctuation is also very good. Patricia.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2025
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Mistydawn
I thought it was a great chapter, and I didn't see any mistakes, but then again I was so intrigued with the story I didn't really look. Your chapter is very interesting, well-written. Your characters seem realistic relatable. I look forward to reading more.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2025
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I thought it was a great chapter, and I didn't see any mistakes, but then again I was so intrigued with the story I didn't really look. Your chapter is very interesting, well-written. Your characters seem realistic relatable. I look forward to reading more.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2025
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from royowen
Unfortunately the electricity is out, which is a bit of a problem but he's looking after Rebekah, she's pregnant, but her father seems to belong to a religious, law-bound cult, which forbids all sorts of things, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Typo (I will()be checking,
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2025
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Unfortunately the electricity is out, which is a bit of a problem but he's looking after Rebekah, she's pregnant, but her father seems to belong to a religious, law-bound cult, which forbids all sorts of things, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Typo (I will()be checking,
Comment Written 16-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2025
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Thank you for the kind review. Thank you for the corrections. I appreciate the help.
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Most welcome
Comment from eliz100
This is another excellent story. You are moving the story along nicely. I am looking forward to the next chapter and to when Rebeka tells her father. I do not see any need for improvement. Have a blessed day.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2025
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This is another excellent story. You are moving the story along nicely. I am looking forward to the next chapter and to when Rebeka tells her father. I do not see any need for improvement. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2025
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Begin Again
I know most people of today would think that people who grew up like Rebekah were weird, but their normal people who had different parental standards. I remember I had to get my father's approval for any clothes I wore and none of it were halters or shorts. WE weren't as strict as REbekah's dad but I can understand how she is dealing with all of it and how her fther's opinion counts the most. Well done.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2025
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I know most people of today would think that people who grew up like Rebekah were weird, but their normal people who had different parental standards. I remember I had to get my father's approval for any clothes I wore and none of it were halters or shorts. WE weren't as strict as REbekah's dad but I can understand how she is dealing with all of it and how her fther's opinion counts the most. Well done.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 16-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2025
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Yes, there are still people out there who live and dress like this. Thank you for the understanding.
Comment from Esther Brown
I liked the way you presented Rebeka's past, so matter of fact. It just was. I was raised with much the same guidelines and although my views have changed, it was a good start. A space was missing between will and be, but otherwise perfect. Esther
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2025
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I liked the way you presented Rebeka's past, so matter of fact. It just was. I was raised with much the same guidelines and although my views have changed, it was a good start. A space was missing between will and be, but otherwise perfect. Esther
Comment Written 16-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2025
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Thank you for the kind review.
