Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Their movements are quite rapid and enduring, (no wonder they are the world's best breeders) and as your work displays they leave their print everywhere, ****kahpot

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025

Thanx so much for the review on this shorty, sir -- am so glad to see you active again! Take care over there! ;) Yvette

Comment from Jasmine Girl

Excellent

Haha. I have seen these foot prints many times but I have never thought of them as art pieces. But they are. They are symmetrical and repeatable.

You inspired me to write one, too.

Well done.

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025

Thanx for stopping in on the shorty, my lady -- will be sure to check out your addition today! ;) Yvette

Comment from Mark D. R.

Excellent

Yvette,

a very nice addition to this Renga collaboration

Do like especially the phrasing in your last line. Of course, the alliteration is a plus for me.

Mark

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 Comment Written 09-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025

Thanx so much for the review, Mark -- always good to hear from you over here, sir! :) ;) Yvette

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Excellent renga poem composition, syllables count, and connection between lines. The presentation and imagery are beautiful. Thank you for contributing to the Book and coping the rules to your author notes.

Well done!

Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." -  Atticus

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 Comment Written 09-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025

Thanx for your review here, Gypsy... always so good to hear from you over here! :) Yvette