Comment from jim vecchio

Excellent

That resembles me walking to school on a wintry day in Connecticut. In your few words, you perfectly described the perils of braving a frigid snowfall. Well done.

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 Comment Written 10-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024

These little poems are real buggers to do. How to say so much with so little. I tried to do a 2-4-2 but all I could come up with was:

He came
I killed him dead
Dug hole :-)

reply by jim vecchio on 11-Dec-2024

i would awrd you a prize for that!

reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024

Well, that's cause you like me. your good taste shines through!
LOL Karen

reply by jim vecchio on 16-Dec-2024

Love your poems!

reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024

:-)

reply by jim vecchio on 17-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024

I have never seen snow in Texas. Karen

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Cleverly done following on from the last entry. You've picked up on another sort of coat against the whiteness of the ice. And reinforced the hurt and our less dignified coping skills in wintry conditions. Take care out there yourself! Debbie

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 Comment Written 10-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024

I was talking to my sister about her knee. She fell a month ago. and now it is giving her trouble. So that informed my poem. It doesn't snow here, but It can get slick. thanks for the read. Karen