The lion and the calf
A poem12 total reviews
Comment from Sallyo
Love the flow and the rhyme and sentiment as ever with yours but there are a few typos and an Evil Eddie intervention - see below.
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Life's path has been messed up by Evil Eddie
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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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Love the flow and the rhyme and sentiment as ever with yours but there are a few typos and an Evil Eddie intervention - see below.
Wee
We
histry
history (unless you elided it on purpose)
impossioble
impossible
Life's path has been messed up by Evil Eddie
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Comment Written 12-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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Thanks Sally, for these marvellous comments and a super review, blessings Roy
Comment from DonandVicki
That's the kind of world that we need right now, where the lion can lay peacefully with the lamb. To much poisonous darts flying about these days. Good poem as always.
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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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That's the kind of world that we need right now, where the lion can lay peacefully with the lamb. To much poisonous darts flying about these days. Good poem as always.
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Comment Written 12-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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Thanks D&V, for these marvellous comments and a super review, blessings Roy