A Fishy Tale
Attic entry for the Picture This club17 total reviews
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
LOL That was the Ballad of the Haddock! I think we should put it to music! We can use an old sea shanty as the melody. I will get right on it! Great tale done in poem form.
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LOL That was the Ballad of the Haddock! I think we should put it to music! We can use an old sea shanty as the melody. I will get right on it! Great tale done in poem form.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2024
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A isn't tale indeed Jim and fish left for a while smells awful and it is best to eat fish when it is fresh! You poem darted about somewhat and I found myself a bit confused by the end of your poem, I was swimming with the fishes, love Dolly x
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A isn't tale indeed Jim and fish left for a while smells awful and it is best to eat fish when it is fresh! You poem darted about somewhat and I found myself a bit confused by the end of your poem, I was swimming with the fishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 05-Oct-2024
Comment from LJbutterfly
What an unusual tale of a group of fifteen men who couldn't figure out how to survive on a fishing trip. Only one man who hadn't eaten in days, left the boat alive and was able to ultimately get hold of a tomato to eat. As gruesome as the story is, it has a smelly, but happy ending. Great entry for the club.
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What an unusual tale of a group of fifteen men who couldn't figure out how to survive on a fishing trip. Only one man who hadn't eaten in days, left the boat alive and was able to ultimately get hold of a tomato to eat. As gruesome as the story is, it has a smelly, but happy ending. Great entry for the club.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2024
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
What an imagination. I have the ten little Indian story many times. You did it justice. Tongue in cheek works well for you. But tell me frind, why does the fish still stink? Karen
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What an imagination. I have the ten little Indian story many times. You did it justice. Tongue in cheek works well for you. But tell me frind, why does the fish still stink? Karen
Comment Written 05-Oct-2024
Comment from barbara.wilkey
So much violence on this fishing trip. I guess this story/poem had a good ending. I'm curious why didn't they fish instead of killing each other. I guess maybe I missed something. Thank you for sharing.
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So much violence on this fishing trip. I guess this story/poem had a good ending. I'm curious why didn't they fish instead of killing each other. I guess maybe I missed something. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2024
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Well, well, well.
Guess you could just about put anything in the old attic that you had a mind to.
Before it ended, six lost their tale - (tail?)
The rhyming might have been a bit contrived and forced, but it perfectly matched your theme song. Great work! (sincere face here)
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Well, well, well.
Guess you could just about put anything in the old attic that you had a mind to.
Before it ended, six lost their tale - (tail?)
The rhyming might have been a bit contrived and forced, but it perfectly matched your theme song. Great work! (sincere face here)
Comment Written 05-Oct-2024
Comment from Ric Myworld
A fish in the attic isn't probably the best place for it to be. But I'm sure if the nose catches a whiff it won't be hard to recognize scent. Thank for sharing another fine poem.
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A fish in the attic isn't probably the best place for it to be. But I'm sure if the nose catches a whiff it won't be hard to recognize scent. Thank for sharing another fine poem.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
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Comment Written 05-Oct-2024