Robins Come Out in Spring
The changing of winter to spring40 total reviews
Comment from estory
This is one of those classical pastoral romantic celebrations of nature and the seasons. Very colorful language, the red robins, the painted leaves, and the white snow that is the harbinger of winter. It's like a recitation of an late autumn day. estory
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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This is one of those classical pastoral romantic celebrations of nature and the seasons. Very colorful language, the red robins, the painted leaves, and the white snow that is the harbinger of winter. It's like a recitation of an late autumn day. estory
Comment Written 23-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful words and excellent rating
Comment from June Sargent
As autumn approaches, winter will not be far behind. It's inspiring to picture the return of spring, as highlighted in this poem. It makes the icy, cold weather more bearable!
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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As autumn approaches, winter will not be far behind. It's inspiring to picture the return of spring, as highlighted in this poem. It makes the icy, cold weather more bearable!
Comment Written 23-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments and excellent rating
Comment from TPAC
Oh yeah. Bang. Bang. Bang. Do that thing, doing it with such grace and ease, feeling this soft conveyance: expounding views captivating to my interests. Well done. I have no needed suggestions for any improvement. Fine as is: in my viewpoint.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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Oh yeah. Bang. Bang. Bang. Do that thing, doing it with such grace and ease, feeling this soft conveyance: expounding views captivating to my interests. Well done. I have no needed suggestions for any improvement. Fine as is: in my viewpoint.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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Thank you so much for your kind encouraging words. And thank you also for the extra star. It is much appreciated.
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a beautifully written poem for spring. It has a Lovely flow and rhyme I love your photo it compliments your poem well. Very nicely done. Nice overall presentation.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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This is a beautifully written poem for spring. It has a Lovely flow and rhyme I love your photo it compliments your poem well. Very nicely done. Nice overall presentation.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments and excellent rating
Comment from Teri7
Pam, I enjoyed reading your poem about the transition from Winter to Spring. You used great descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the artwork you chose and your words. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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Pam, I enjoyed reading your poem about the transition from Winter to Spring. You used great descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the artwork you chose and your words. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 22-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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Blessings to you too, and thank you for your wonderful comments and excellent rating
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
I love your poem about the changes through the seasons.... from winter to spring, both are beautiful in their own way.
"wintery cold, starts to digest the leaves as they molt" lovely imagery. ...
"yellow, rust and deep red,
the forests become a colorful bed."
When I was little I loved jumping in puddles (*=*)
when the ice form a cracked.
Well done
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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I love your poem about the changes through the seasons.... from winter to spring, both are beautiful in their own way.
"wintery cold, starts to digest the leaves as they molt" lovely imagery. ...
"yellow, rust and deep red,
the forests become a colorful bed."
When I was little I loved jumping in puddles (*=*)
when the ice form a cracked.
Well done
Comment Written 22-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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we only had rain puddles where I grew up. They weren't so cold when I jumped into them. I'm not sure what I would've done with an ice puddle But thank you for your wonderful comments.
Comment from Gunner Lil
Very good sensory descriptions that show and does not tell. This poem has a nice pace and flow.
I can't wait to see the first robin of spring in my back yard when the snow melts.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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Very good sensory descriptions that show and does not tell. This poem has a nice pace and flow.
I can't wait to see the first robin of spring in my back yard when the snow melts.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments and excellent rating
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I grew up in the Midwest, Illinois, and towards the end of winter I always started searching for the first robin. I'd get excited when is saw. Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem with us.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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I grew up in the Midwest, Illinois, and towards the end of winter I always started searching for the first robin. I'd get excited when is saw. Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem with us.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comment and excellent rating
Comment from Brenda Strauser
What a very nice poem. I like how you went through all the seasons. The rhyming was very good. I enjoyed reading it. We had 3 robins make nests in some of our trees. Great job.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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What a very nice poem. I like how you went through all the seasons. The rhyming was very good. I enjoyed reading it. We had 3 robins make nests in some of our trees. Great job.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful words and I think everybody like us loves seeing the robins come back because then we know it surely spring. The groundhogs are not as wonderful as the robins are.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Pam, I absolutely adore the robin. Always have. It's such a lovely little bird with its read chest. In the part of Spain where I live, close to the Mediterranean coast, we only see them at winter time when they arrive for survival. I enjoyed reading your poem. Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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Hi Pam, I absolutely adore the robin. Always have. It's such a lovely little bird with its read chest. In the part of Spain where I live, close to the Mediterranean coast, we only see them at winter time when they arrive for survival. I enjoyed reading your poem. Ulla xcx
Comment Written 22-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful and thoughtful comments. I enjoyed hearing what you had to say.
