2024 Japanese Poetry
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Comment from Douglas Goff
There really is no other feeling quite like a broken heart. It even expounds the other feelings like anger, hate, and sorrow. Interesting. I guess love is it's Yang.
Most enjoyable and thought-provoking. I do not enjoy your work any less, I have just been on a different site with a few of the others. Imam doing VERY well there.
Appreciate you!
Douglas
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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There really is no other feeling quite like a broken heart. It even expounds the other feelings like anger, hate, and sorrow. Interesting. I guess love is it's Yang.
Most enjoyable and thought-provoking. I do not enjoy your work any less, I have just been on a different site with a few of the others. Imam doing VERY well there.
Appreciate you!
Douglas
Comment Written 04-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Douglas
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from lyenochka
It's so true. Even though we have to go through a lot of brokenness to go to God and realize that He alone can truly love us fully, His light of love will shine through and mend our broken hearts.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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It's so true. Even though we have to go through a lot of brokenness to go to God and realize that He alone can truly love us fully, His light of love will shine through and mend our broken hearts.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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Yes, that's true. Thank you very much, big sister ❤️
Love
Marival ❤️
Comment from RJ Heritage
This is quite relatable to my own situation. God did enter through those cracks and in came his light, and with conscious changes, the love of my life.also came.
Very beautiful words tha encourages us to see the only perfect love comes from God.
RJ
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This is quite relatable to my own situation. God did enter through those cracks and in came his light, and with conscious changes, the love of my life.also came.
Very beautiful words tha encourages us to see the only perfect love comes from God.
RJ
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Comment Written 04-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, RJ 😊
Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
very nice sweetly hopeful gogyohka
love the thought of through the cracks light will enter
powerful.
one suggestion i have is for this line:
don't you fear don't you cry--
i think it needs a hyphen, comma, or semicolon after 'fear'
don't you fear- don't you cry-
other than that, a great poem!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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very nice sweetly hopeful gogyohka
love the thought of through the cracks light will enter
powerful.
one suggestion i have is for this line:
don't you fear don't you cry--
i think it needs a hyphen, comma, or semicolon after 'fear'
don't you fear- don't you cry-
other than that, a great poem!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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Comment Written 04-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley. I added a dash 😊
Gypsy