The Real Question is...
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Comment from ESOSTINE
The photo of Joe Biden looking at his time is a perfect choice to complement the poem. He might as well have known that his time is due. Well done, and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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The photo of Joe Biden looking at his time is a perfect choice to complement the poem. He might as well have known that his time is due. Well done, and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from Jesse James Doty
You don't say whether this is supposed to be humorous or not. When you write who did the hit what exactly do you mean? I am not sure what you are implying with this post. There seems to be no point to this piece except to win a contest. Well, good luck with the contest.
Jesse
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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You don't say whether this is supposed to be humorous or not. When you write who did the hit what exactly do you mean? I am not sure what you are implying with this post. There seems to be no point to this piece except to win a contest. Well, good luck with the contest.
Jesse
Comment Written 27-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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Sorry you don't it but thanks anyway.
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Yep.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
The fact that he's looking at his watch might suggest that he realised his time was up! But, truthfully, who knows? Your questioning 5-7-5 is an excellent and very current entry for the contest. Well done and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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The fact that he's looking at his watch might suggest that he realised his time was up! But, truthfully, who knows? Your questioning 5-7-5 is an excellent and very current entry for the contest. Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 27-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from mermaids
Your words are relevant to today's political climate. I imagine the president was recommended by those close to him to not run. Excellent 5-7-5 political poem that says much.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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Your words are relevant to today's political climate. I imagine the president was recommended by those close to him to not run. Excellent 5-7-5 political poem that says much.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from patcelaw
I think the word was given by the people who have been running the administration this last 3 1/2 years. I don't think Joe has ever been up to being president of the United States in this past 3 1/2 years. Patricia.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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I think the word was given by the people who have been running the administration this last 3 1/2 years. I don't think Joe has ever been up to being president of the United States in this past 3 1/2 years. Patricia.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from SimianSavant
It seems unlikely that Joe was behind the hit, but the close connection between Cheatle and Jill Biden suggests there was disproportionate protection favoring her (not a current or future head of state) and a disregard for protecting Trump. Cheatle may have taken the rap to protect the reputations of the higher-ups.
You might find that a different font such as Corben enhances your piece. Thanks for sharing,
SS
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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It seems unlikely that Joe was behind the hit, but the close connection between Cheatle and Jill Biden suggests there was disproportionate protection favoring her (not a current or future head of state) and a disregard for protecting Trump. Cheatle may have taken the rap to protect the reputations of the higher-ups.
You might find that a different font such as Corben enhances your piece. Thanks for sharing,
SS
Comment Written 27-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from s.m.kirby
I am sure you are not alone in the way you're thinking. a lot of people are wondering the same thing, we will never know. Good luck in the contest. God Bless
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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I am sure you are not alone in the way you're thinking. a lot of people are wondering the same thing, we will never know. Good luck in the contest. God Bless
Comment Written 27-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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Thank you.
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You're welcome
Comment from Rachelle Allen
What are the chances that the public will ever know the answer? When politics is involved, subterfuge is the name of the game, 24/7. But why am I telling this to a retired Marine? You have your PhD in this kind of knowledge! (Thank you for your service, and thank you for protecting me here at home.)
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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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What are the chances that the public will ever know the answer? When politics is involved, subterfuge is the name of the game, 24/7. But why am I telling this to a retired Marine? You have your PhD in this kind of knowledge! (Thank you for your service, and thank you for protecting me here at home.)
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Comment Written 27-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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Semper Fi and Thank you!
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xoxo
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Lil,
This poem fits the topic well. It is serious yet a bit witty. I agree that President Biden did the right thing in stepping down. But I doubt he or Donald Trump had anything to do the the assassination attempt.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a wonderful weekend.
Joan
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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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Hi Lil,
This poem fits the topic well. It is serious yet a bit witty. I agree that President Biden did the right thing in stepping down. But I doubt he or Donald Trump had anything to do the the assassination attempt.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a wonderful weekend.
Joan
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Comment Written 27-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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Thank you!
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No problem, Lil.