Haunted Shadows
Tectractys practice17 total reviews
Comment from royowen
An excellent entry in this tectrartys poetry contest, who knows what sparks a nightmare, which aren't uncommon among people, I think perhaps from unfortunate life experiences, well done Melissa, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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An excellent entry in this tectrartys poetry contest, who knows what sparks a nightmare, which aren't uncommon among people, I think perhaps from unfortunate life experiences, well done Melissa, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 26-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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Thanks so much Roy!! I enjoyed reacquainting myself with this poetic form. They can be challenging. So appreciate your words and comments!!
Melissa
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Well done
Comment from Tom Horonzy
I hope you are well. I am concerned. R u ok?
Where I often found you at FS it seems, perhaps, like you have gone elsewhere
Before this piece your last entry was June 30
As for this piece I find my dreams are a cornucopia of this and that and whatever, but very rarely find spooks and goblins.
Be well.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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I hope you are well. I am concerned. R u ok?
Where I often found you at FS it seems, perhaps, like you have gone elsewhere
Before this piece your last entry was June 30
As for this piece I find my dreams are a cornucopia of this and that and whatever, but very rarely find spooks and goblins.
Be well.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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Thanks so much Tom!! Thanks for caring about my absence... life has gotten very busy and I haven't had time to really write poetry in quite a while. I enjoyed reacquainting myself with this poetic form. They can be challenging. So appreciate your words and comments!!
Melissa
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Very nicely done, with the word count that is, of course, just right. Also, deep and meaningful, insightful and thought-provoking. Finally, what a perfect picture you found to accentuate this creative poem! Great job. xoxo
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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Very nicely done, with the word count that is, of course, just right. Also, deep and meaningful, insightful and thought-provoking. Finally, what a perfect picture you found to accentuate this creative poem! Great job. xoxo
Comment Written 26-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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Thanks so much Rachelle!! I enjoyed reacquainting myself with this poetic form. They can be challenging. So appreciate your words and comments!!
Melissa
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You're welcome! I've joined Gypsy's Japanese Poetry Club this summer, and you're right: some of the forms are quite challenging! But I've been enjoying it enormously! xoxo
Comment from jessizero
I liked this tetractys poem for the contest. You got the syllable count correct, and I liked your message. That last line was a great take on nightmares. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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I liked this tetractys poem for the contest. You got the syllable count correct, and I liked your message. That last line was a great take on nightmares. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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Thanks so much Jess!! I enjoyed reacquainting myself with this poetic form. They can be challenging. So appreciate your words and comments!!
Melissa
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent Tectractys poem with a good syllable count and connection between lines. Lovely presentation and word imagery. I believe there are two feelings and two choices: love or fear.
well done,
gypsy
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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Excellent Tectractys poem with a good syllable count and connection between lines. Lovely presentation and word imagery. I believe there are two feelings and two choices: love or fear.
well done,
gypsy
Comment Written 26-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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Thanks so much Gypsy!! I enjoyed reacquainting myself with this poetic form. They can be challenging. So appreciate your words and comments!!
Melissa
Comment from patcelaw
This is very well written and it was a pleasure to listen to. It flows very well when it is read aloud I wish you the very best with all of your writing and may God bless you. Patricia.
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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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This is very well written and it was a pleasure to listen to. It flows very well when it is read aloud I wish you the very best with all of your writing and may God bless you. Patricia.
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Comment Written 26-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much Patricia! Hugs, Melissa
Comment from Sally Law
So true and I quite agee. Sometimes they bring an important message of change, like Jacob Marley and the ghosts of Christmas' past, present, and future. A wonderful poem in this most difficult form. Sending you my best today as always, dear Melissa, and blessings abundant to you all.
Sal Xoxo
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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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So true and I quite agee. Sometimes they bring an important message of change, like Jacob Marley and the ghosts of Christmas' past, present, and future. A wonderful poem in this most difficult form. Sending you my best today as always, dear Melissa, and blessings abundant to you all.
Sal Xoxo
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Comment Written 26-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Thank you sweet Sal. I saw the prompt and thought I would practice. It has been a while since I have written one in this form. Hugs to you and blessings on your family!
Melissa
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Most welcome! So glad to see you today, Melissa! I've missed you!
Sal :))xoxo