Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

The joy and excitement are very well expressed in this poem which I am sure is your own story. The pleasure and love are real and lasted a lifetime. Well done.
Wendy

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024

I am always grateful when I get socialized thank you so much

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

This brought up some memories for me, and I almost cried. I know that was not your intention, but it's good that you got a strong reaction from the reader. Your poem was lovely. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024

Thank you so much for your kind review. I appreciate it.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I feel like this was your own story as I remember you and your husband got married very soon after you both met at your aunt's house. Well done with your etheree poem!

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024

You are so correct. And yes, we did get married shortly after we met. It was only like five months after we met when we got married.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is a romantic and loving post about the happiness that can be enjoyed in meeting someone who makes our heart beat faster. I enjoyed this uplifting post Patricia, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024

Thank you so much for your kind review. I appreciate it very much.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

A nicely written etheree my friend, the biggest event in one's life is to join one's life to another, it's then one is ready to add to that number, this is so beautifully written, blessings Roy
Typo: it only took a momen(t)

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024

Thank you so much for the very kind reviewing for forgetting the typo. I had done a little revision on it and I missed that.

reply by royowen on 19-Jul-2024

Most welcome

Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill

Excellent

A nice free verse. People don't know I think, that free verse is just as hard to do as anything else. We want to rhyme. It is in our nature. Tomorrow and Sunday will take a toll.Wish us luck. Karen

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024

Thank you very much for your kind of review. I appreciate it. Have a good safe weekend.

reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 19-Jul-2024

U R Welcome:-)

Comment from jim vecchio

Excellent

Very similar to my story. Proposed on the second date, we bought a ring. I put a down payment on a kitchen table, and we married about five months later. A good formula, if you can do it!

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 Comment Written 19-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024

Thank you so much for stopping by reviewing my work and leaving such a nice comment.

reply by jim vecchio on 20-Jul-2024

You should be used to nice words always!

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Thank you for sharing this fun poem with us. I could feel the excitement of the moment of getting engaged. I enjoyed reading. Your presentation was wonderful.

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 Comment Written 19-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024

Thank you so much for your very kind review. I appreciate it. The idea for the poem came by the image I saw of the bubbling.