The Peasant Bethany
75 Word Flash Fiction contest entry14 total reviews
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Go Bethany!! You show him WOMAN POWER!! Yeahhhhh! I mean, come on, anyone who looks that gorgeous in armour deserves to be at the top of the food chain, don't you agree!!
Cool twist on a flash fiction. Making it a POEM? That's got to be a zillion times more of a challenge!! xoxo
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2024
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Go Bethany!! You show him WOMAN POWER!! Yeahhhhh! I mean, come on, anyone who looks that gorgeous in armour deserves to be at the top of the food chain, don't you agree!!
Cool twist on a flash fiction. Making it a POEM? That's got to be a zillion times more of a challenge!! xoxo
Comment Written 17-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2024
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Thank you for the awesome review, Rachelle. You're actually the only one to mention how challenging it is to write a metered poem with a strict word count. You're right, it wasn't an easy task to pull off. Lol.
I went looking through the pictures I had for something to write about and came across this one so went with that. I actually added the crown in there from another picture. I appreciate the stop in, Rachelle. I'm glad you liked this dark, little piece.
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Ron
Comment from jessizero
I hope you don't get disqualified, because you told an exciting and interesting story in your seventy-five words. Thank you so much for sharing, and best of luck to you.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2024
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I hope you don't get disqualified, because you told an exciting and interesting story in your seventy-five words. Thank you so much for sharing, and best of luck to you.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2024
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I have my fingers crossed I don't get booted out. Lol. I mentioned in the author notes that is still actually a story even though it's in poetry form. Lol. We'll see.
Thank you for the great review and good luck wishes, Jessi.
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Ron
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the 75 Words Flash Fiction contest. Very unique presentation by turning it into a poem. Thank you for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2024
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An excellent entry for the 75 Words Flash Fiction contest. Very unique presentation by turning it into a poem. Thank you for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 17-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2024
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Thank you for the kind review, Marilyn. I really appreciate the stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this little piece.
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Ron
Comment from Catherine Deslippe
I love poetry that shares a story and you have an amazing talent to do so. The twist from a peasant to the crown was awesome. Keep up your great writing skilld
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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2024
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I love poetry that shares a story and you have an amazing talent to do so. The twist from a peasant to the crown was awesome. Keep up your great writing skilld
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Comment Written 17-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much for the great review, Catherine. Yes, I love stories in poetry form as well. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars and kind comments. I'm glad you liked this short, dark piece. Have yourself a wonderful night.
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Ron