Rise and Shine
Nature 3-5-315 total reviews
Comment from jessizero
This was a nice poem for the writing prompt. You got the syllable counts and subject matter as was required. The picture you supplied brought the "morning dew" to life. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
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This was a nice poem for the writing prompt. You got the syllable counts and subject matter as was required. The picture you supplied brought the "morning dew" to life. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much!
Xo
Comment from Bill Schott
This 3-5-3, Rise and Shine, has the proper formatting and imagines the wholesome charm of a concerned mother beckoning all her children to rise and face the new day. Nice.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
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This 3-5-3, Rise and Shine, has the proper formatting and imagines the wholesome charm of a concerned mother beckoning all her children to rise and face the new day. Nice.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much!
Xo
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I enjoyed your poem. Your haiku beautifully captures the "awakening" of nature. I enjoyed the imagery. For me "saplings wake" made me think of new beginnings while "kissed by morning dew" adds a nurturing touch.
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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
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I enjoyed your poem. Your haiku beautifully captures the "awakening" of nature. I enjoyed the imagery. For me "saplings wake" made me think of new beginnings while "kissed by morning dew" adds a nurturing touch.
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Comment Written 09-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much! :)
Xo
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Nature 3-5-3 writing prompt. A lovely description of a dewy early morning in nature. You picture adds nicely to the presentation of the poem. Well done.
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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
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An excellent entry for the Nature 3-5-3 writing prompt. A lovely description of a dewy early morning in nature. You picture adds nicely to the presentation of the poem. Well done.
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Comment Written 09-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much, Marylin!
Xo
Comment from NanaGaye
A perfect 3/5/3 referring to nature. Even without the lovely picture you have chosen your words show the scene. Good luck with the contest All the best NanaGaye
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2024
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A perfect 3/5/3 referring to nature. Even without the lovely picture you have chosen your words show the scene. Good luck with the contest All the best NanaGaye
Comment Written 08-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much!
Xoxo