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Living With Schizophrenia

A brother and brother battle schizophrenia

32 total reviews 
Comment from Wendy G
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Unfortunately, I am out of sixes. I would have offered you one for this insightful and well-written poem. It's so sad that he has these episodes, but fortunate that his meds keep him gentle for most of the time. You are right, this mental illness is the primary reason for many crimes committed. Well done, also for raising awareness about it. Thanks for sharing.
Wendy

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
    Thank you for your wonderful comments and a great review
Comment from Vivvianna
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This piece is so touching! What a beautiful way to honor your brother.
I love this so much. . Thank you for sharing something so close and personal. just beautiful.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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There is a lot we don't understand about the brain and how it operates and it is very sad that your brother suffers like this and has to take daily medicine. A fine poem with good rhymes to tell your story here Pam, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Comment from Janet Foor
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Very well written Pam. I have a sister-in-law who suffers from schizophrenia. As long as she is medicated, she manages ok but the side effects of the medication is hard on her. She is so bright- college educated, etc but this horrific disease knows no boundaries.
Thank you for sharing.
Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Comment from Michele Harber
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Oh my gosh, Pam. You've lived quite a life! I appreciate the fact that, having experienced mental issues personally and with family, you discuss those who suffer from them with respect and understanding. With that showing through your words, it allows the reader to read it with equal understanding and not disdain. Even when the character in the poem kills his sister, you make the reader believe he honestly thought he was saving her.

Your poem is interesting and informative, and your personal experiences even moreso. Thank you for opening up about your related family issues.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
    Thank you for your wonderful review
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    I always look forward to your reviews. They are so thorough and encouraging.
reply by Michele Harber on 11-Jul-2024
    You're very welcome, Pam. I always want my reviews to be useful, so I try my best to be thorough. And, if they're encouraging, it's only because I'm also honest.
Comment from Ulla
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Hi Pam, this is wonderful poem with a true story within. It's also a scary story what could have happened. I don't think anyone can really understand what the condition means unless you've experienced it or as you being close to.someone who has it. Ulla xcx

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Comment from jenintorre
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You tell a great story in a poem Pam. This one is so good and well rhymed but very disturbing. Also very informative about the condition. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes. Jen.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I understand that people who suffer from schizophrenia can live normal lives, if they continue to take their medications. Unfortunately, they sometimes fail to do that. Thank you for highlighting this disease. It's a real problem that effects many.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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    and excellent stars
Comment from gansach
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Once again, thank you for sharing your experiences with this devastating disease. I have some familiarity with it as my daughter has schizophrenic tendencies and we've dealt with and still are dealing with them. Your poem is compelling with good rhyme and meter and tells a sad story. Well done!

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Comment from Teri7
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Pam, This is a very well written poem about a brother with an illness that is not easy to live with. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery that goes with your words.

love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
    Thank you for your wonderful review
    and excellent stars