Follow the Rain
A Love Poem17 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 4-2-2-6 suite, Follow the Rain, takes the readers through this sloshy romance that seems to battle the "elements" throughout the "stormy" relationship. It seems that all is better at the end.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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This 4-2-2-6 suite, Follow the Rain, takes the readers through this sloshy romance that seems to battle the "elements" throughout the "stormy" relationship. It seems that all is better at the end.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much, Bill!
Xo
Jess
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is so lovely and charmingly versed I just keep reading it! Your cyclical love poem takes us through the seasons and the course of a love affair that started with passion, lost its heat during the windblown, icy winter months, only to be revived in the spring again by those sexy April showers:) You can't beat them as a metaphor for rebirth! Well done, Jessica, and good luck! Debbie xo
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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This is so lovely and charmingly versed I just keep reading it! Your cyclical love poem takes us through the seasons and the course of a love affair that started with passion, lost its heat during the windblown, icy winter months, only to be revived in the spring again by those sexy April showers:) You can't beat them as a metaphor for rebirth! Well done, Jessica, and good luck! Debbie xo
Comment Written 08-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much, Debbie! Your insightful reviews are always appreciated!
Xo
Jess
Comment from royowen
I particularly like the metaphor at the end, like April rain I fell, this is beautifully written Jessica, this is almost the perfect free verse, for some a lot of the newbies think that prose is free verse, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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I particularly like the metaphor at the end, like April rain I fell, this is beautifully written Jessica, this is almost the perfect free verse, for some a lot of the newbies think that prose is free verse, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 08-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much, Roy!
Xo
Jess
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Most welcime
Comment from Colorado Owl
So beautifully written! Love and passion are a beautiful journey, and your description did it justice. We learn from the seasons of our life, and if love is meant to be, it will survive. Thank you for your poem!
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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So beautifully written! Love and passion are a beautiful journey, and your description did it justice. We learn from the seasons of our life, and if love is meant to be, it will survive. Thank you for your poem!
Comment Written 08-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much! I am honored!
Xo
Jess
Comment from Ricky1024
This is a love poem contest entryRich in Theme and Imagery
It also read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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This is a love poem contest entryRich in Theme and Imagery
It also read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky
Comment Written 07-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much!
Xo
Jess
Comment from lyenochka
There seems to be a "falling in love" scene with the April rains. It seems that the passions or "pull of heat" continue even into the winter months. Best wishes in the contest!
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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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There seems to be a "falling in love" scene with the April rains. It seems that the passions or "pull of heat" continue even into the winter months. Best wishes in the contest!
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Comment Written 07-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much, Helen!
Xo
Jess
Comment from patcelaw
This is a beautifully worded and well presented love on for the contest and I wish you the very best in the contest. May you have a wonderful week and may God bless you. Patricia.
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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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This is a beautifully worded and well presented love on for the contest and I wish you the very best in the contest. May you have a wonderful week and may God bless you. Patricia.
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Comment Written 07-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much, Patricia!
Xo
Jess