The Brownies That Weren't There
Humorous rhymed poem about brownies38 total reviews
Comment from jmdg1954
Oh yeah... a plate of chocolate brownies, without chocolate icing and a glass of cold milk ( really cold), and I can make a significant amount of vacancy on that plate.
I think you can tell, brownies are one of my favorites ...
Cheers,
John
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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Oh yeah... a plate of chocolate brownies, without chocolate icing and a glass of cold milk ( really cold), and I can make a significant amount of vacancy on that plate.
I think you can tell, brownies are one of my favorites ...
Cheers,
John
Comment Written 03-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your awesome, personalized comments.
Comment from Janet Foor
LOL! This is fun and funny and ohhhhh so true. I do get the munchies late at night especially when I can't get to sleep. I think if I just have one, I will be satisfied and go right to sleep and sometimes, I do and sometimes, I just eat the whole thing. (smiling) Sooooo good.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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LOL! This is fun and funny and ohhhhh so true. I do get the munchies late at night especially when I can't get to sleep. I think if I just have one, I will be satisfied and go right to sleep and sometimes, I do and sometimes, I just eat the whole thing. (smiling) Sooooo good.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 03-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much for the pretty five-star review.
Comment from gansach
Ah, temptation! This is a great entry for the contest. I fear I would be similarly tempted being a chocoholic and, once begun, it's so hard to stop. I enjoyed your poem very much--and now I want brownies. Well done!
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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Ah, temptation! This is a great entry for the contest. I fear I would be similarly tempted being a chocoholic and, once begun, it's so hard to stop. I enjoyed your poem very much--and now I want brownies. Well done!
Comment Written 03-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review.
Comment from Sally Law
I can understand because Brownies rock in the chocolate department. Rich, fudgy and moist. Mine are gluten free but they're still deliciousoso! Your neighbors loved the sugar cookies, I'm sure. I wish I lived closer, Cookie. :))
Sending you my best today as always, and by very best wishes for the temptation poetry contest.
Sal :)) xoxo
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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I can understand because Brownies rock in the chocolate department. Rich, fudgy and moist. Mine are gluten free but they're still deliciousoso! Your neighbors loved the sugar cookies, I'm sure. I wish I lived closer, Cookie. :))
Sending you my best today as always, and by very best wishes for the temptation poetry contest.
Sal :)) xoxo
Comment Written 03-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your super review. I had not even thought of gluten-free brownies, but I ought to try those sometime.
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Crystie,
This is a cute poem that tells us about the perils of having chocolate around the house. At least the speaker baked cookies as a replacement for the brownie she ate. She must of been sick if she ate a whole batch of brownies in one sitting.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck with the contest.
Have a great day.
Joan
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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Hi Crystie,
This is a cute poem that tells us about the perils of having chocolate around the house. At least the speaker baked cookies as a replacement for the brownie she ate. She must of been sick if she ate a whole batch of brownies in one sitting.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck with the contest.
Have a great day.
Joan
Comment Written 03-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your super review. I ended up eating the smaller plate of brownies to give away, not the larger plate.
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My pleasure, Crystie. Well, that?s better.
Joan
Comment from Shanbreen
Sugar cookies for brownies? How can you compare? =) Your poem hits the chord. Many of us, I believe have this dilemma. As the ad for chips go: You just can't eat one. This poem is perfect for the Temptation Poetry Contest. Best of luck.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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Sugar cookies for brownies? How can you compare? =) Your poem hits the chord. Many of us, I believe have this dilemma. As the ad for chips go: You just can't eat one. This poem is perfect for the Temptation Poetry Contest. Best of luck.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much for your perceptive review.
Comment from Begin Again
Diet or not, let there be chocolate of any kind in my house and it's screaming my name. I try to shut it out, but I can't until it's gone. So I relate to this story very well. If I should make something for the neighbor, it better be delivered immediately or they'll never see it.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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Diet or not, let there be chocolate of any kind in my house and it's screaming my name. I try to shut it out, but I can't until it's gone. So I relate to this story very well. If I should make something for the neighbor, it better be delivered immediately or they'll never see it.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 03-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your great review. I agree totally.
Comment from Steve Foreman
I have never eaten a chocolate brownie - but, found this to be a funny, quirky and mouth-watering poem, simple and well constructed. I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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I have never eaten a chocolate brownie - but, found this to be a funny, quirky and mouth-watering poem, simple and well constructed. I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing.
Comment from June Sargent
lol we can all relate! I've substituted gifts many times myself when I sampled my goodies to see if they were up to par and was nott quite sure until they were all gone!
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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lol we can all relate! I've substituted gifts many times myself when I sampled my goodies to see if they were up to par and was nott quite sure until they were all gone!
Comment Written 03-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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Yep, this happens more often than I would like. I tell the grocery store cashiers, "I buy one treat to eat and one to give away." Thanks for reading and commenting!
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, The Brownies that Weren't There, presents the scenario of every diet's downfall -- brownies. Better to eat them now than give them to others and then like those people less.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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This poem, The Brownies that Weren't There, presents the scenario of every diet's downfall -- brownies. Better to eat them now than give them to others and then like those people less.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your very original review! You have an efficient point of view on this. LOL.
