Comment from Shirley Ann Bunyan

Excellent

Hi Erika,
What a delightful love poem you have written here.
Soulful, not sloppy.

This is great...

'Love like the wind.
Felt but not seen.'

and this...
'Sing me the song of the stars,
A symphony of grace.
That I may pluck one from heaven,
And give it your name.'

Loved it. Well done.

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2024

Thank you so much

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

This is a very good poem for the challenge. Your words flow well and it's thought provoking. Thank you for sharing this. I enjoyed reading it and your presentation is excellent.

Best wishes,

Alex

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 Comment Written 14-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2024

Thank you so much

Comment from bonespur

Excellent

You can tell that our lord Jesus christ is the love of your life. He doesn't care what we say and do. He doesn't have the time for that. I wish you luck in the contest. Have a blessed day

I hope you have

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 Comment Written 14-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2024

Thank you, you as well.

reply by bonespur on 14-Jun-2024

You're welcome