Ah, Early Summer
same as the title25 total reviews
Comment from Aussie
Tell me where you are and I will join you. Ah, the warmth and peace with only the birds for company. Spring has sprung, the grass is riss, I wonder where the flowers is? A happy poem. K xx
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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Tell me where you are and I will join you. Ah, the warmth and peace with only the birds for company. Spring has sprung, the grass is riss, I wonder where the flowers is? A happy poem. K xx
Comment Written 27-May-2024
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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Ha! Thank you. I live in Prairie Grove, IL. Be happy any time you show up.
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I'll bring my Kookaburra with me. Hee, Hee. K xx
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Must be lots of prairie dogs digging holes in your front lawn. Hee, Hee.
Comment from kahpot
Your writings/poems so intrigue me, I find myself matching each stanza with the one before and then after, from this one I got peace and tranquility, and I do agree, no phones or computers, what a blessing****kahpot
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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Your writings/poems so intrigue me, I find myself matching each stanza with the one before and then after, from this one I got peace and tranquility, and I do agree, no phones or computers, what a blessing****kahpot
Comment Written 27-May-2024
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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Smiling. Yes, in all seriousness, I was in ecstasy.
It is sooo seldom that I can feel Mother Earth, and just listen and float. Thank you.
I tried to convey my feelings.
Comment from Boogienights
It kind of sounds like heaven. Peace and quiet would do all of us good. I like this poem and the way you structured it. The entire poem had a calm feeling about it...thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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It kind of sounds like heaven. Peace and quiet would do all of us good. I like this poem and the way you structured it. The entire poem had a calm feeling about it...thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 26-May-2024
reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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Thank you.
Comment from ESOSTINE
Waoh! A well presented poem of peace of mind and tranquility in the presence of the beauties of nature. In these days where the use of man made tools and toys seems to be the prevailing tradition, returning to nature tends to usher in the needed calmness of mind. Good job, dear Victor.
reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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Waoh! A well presented poem of peace of mind and tranquility in the presence of the beauties of nature. In these days where the use of man made tools and toys seems to be the prevailing tradition, returning to nature tends to usher in the needed calmness of mind. Good job, dear Victor.
Comment Written 26-May-2024
reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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Thank you so much.
'Preciate it.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
This is well-written and gives a feeling of calm. Just a simple summer afternoon enjoying the sights, sounds and feeling of the outdoors. i wish you many more days of such pleasure. They are wonderful when you finally get to enjoy them. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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This is well-written and gives a feeling of calm. Just a simple summer afternoon enjoying the sights, sounds and feeling of the outdoors. i wish you many more days of such pleasure. They are wonderful when you finally get to enjoy them. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 26-May-2024
reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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Thank you for reading me, dear.
Comment from estory
I think your poem in structure and image, rhythm and cadence captures the look and feel, the experience of summer. There's a laziness in the air, a sublime appreciation for the calm and the softness, the relaxed vibe, the lack of struggle to the season. We can put our heads back, lie down in the hammock, and feel that summer breeze. Listen to the music of the birds. watch the kids playing around on the lawn. Take a deep breath and savor the moment. estory
reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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I think your poem in structure and image, rhythm and cadence captures the look and feel, the experience of summer. There's a laziness in the air, a sublime appreciation for the calm and the softness, the relaxed vibe, the lack of struggle to the season. We can put our heads back, lie down in the hammock, and feel that summer breeze. Listen to the music of the birds. watch the kids playing around on the lawn. Take a deep breath and savor the moment. estory
Comment Written 26-May-2024
reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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Exactly, my friend.
Thank you.
Comment from jake cosmos aller
it is a great poem about the love of nature and the natural world all around us I like the word choice and the easy natural flow of the words painting the mood
reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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it is a great poem about the love of nature and the natural world all around us I like the word choice and the easy natural flow of the words painting the mood
Comment Written 26-May-2024
reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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Hi buddy. Thank you so much. I?ve missed you.
Oh, hey-I?m being published. They want to publish a book of my poetry. I can?t believe this!
Comment from Jesse James Doty
Hey Doug. I like the notes better than the poem. No phone no AI, no television, just peace and quiet tuning in with Mother Nature.
Solitude with nature feels good any way you slice it. I got lost halfway through the poem so I reacted to the notes at the end of the post.
Jesse
reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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Hey Doug. I like the notes better than the poem. No phone no AI, no television, just peace and quiet tuning in with Mother Nature.
Solitude with nature feels good any way you slice it. I got lost halfway through the poem so I reacted to the notes at the end of the post.
Jesse
Comment Written 26-May-2024
reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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Ha ha. It?s ok my friend.
Glad something I put down worked for you. Thanks.
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You're welcome, and yes, it did work for me.
Comment from Jill D
I enjoyed your poem it was lovely! Nature can be so therapeutic and beneficial.Just being outdoors can help reboot your mind.
No music. No TV.
No phone. No AI.
No pressure. No problems.
"No Trampoline";)
All the best:)
Jill.
reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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I enjoyed your poem it was lovely! Nature can be so therapeutic and beneficial.Just being outdoors can help reboot your mind.
No music. No TV.
No phone. No AI.
No pressure. No problems.
"No Trampoline";)
All the best:)
Jill.
Comment Written 26-May-2024
reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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Ha ha. Yes, that?s true.
No trampoline. Lol
Thank you.
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You're welcome:)
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and presentation, Doug.
-Is it your own or a random place?
-Your notes are appreciated, too.
-You wrote a very good poem
with effective imagery, beginning
with the opening lines that create
a peaceful mood.
-It allows your mind to wander and think
about your daughter's trampoline.
-I like the verse where you talk about
the neighbor's yard that
"gives reason
for existence."
-A good comparison of the
gusts to a heart beating.
-Good concluding lines, as well.
-Thanks for sharing it.
reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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-Very nice image and presentation, Doug.
-Is it your own or a random place?
-Your notes are appreciated, too.
-You wrote a very good poem
with effective imagery, beginning
with the opening lines that create
a peaceful mood.
-It allows your mind to wander and think
about your daughter's trampoline.
-I like the verse where you talk about
the neighbor's yard that
"gives reason
for existence."
-A good comparison of the
gusts to a heart beating.
-Good concluding lines, as well.
-Thanks for sharing it.
Comment Written 26-May-2024
reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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And thank you for reading this. I enjoyed your review.
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You are very welcome and I appreciate your reply.
