The Cougar Hunter
Tracking women of 'a certain age.'33 total reviews
Comment from EeanBlack
Well I figured I was in for a ride from the beginning. You sound like one of those " how to pic up chics" articles my son used to read. I guess they work. He got one. It was well written though.
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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Well I figured I was in for a ride from the beginning. You sound like one of those " how to pic up chics" articles my son used to read. I guess they work. He got one. It was well written though.
Comment Written 21-May-2024
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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I'm thinking what he got was humiliated!! Maybe it's that glass-half-full thing.
Anyway, thank you for the review. I appreciate your feedback!!
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I am so sorry; I mis-read what you meant. You meant your SON got a woman. I was thinking you meant the guy in my story did. I can be so DUH sometimes. Please forgive me. xo
Comment from Thesis
A very innovative way to do research utilizing a concept and visual observation on a field trip. This professor knows how to teach. The "subject" didn't know that he was being studied. I liked how Cleopatra was making comments, a good clue to what was going on, but not understood until the students said, "Awesome work, Professor Stanton!".
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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A very innovative way to do research utilizing a concept and visual observation on a field trip. This professor knows how to teach. The "subject" didn't know that he was being studied. I liked how Cleopatra was making comments, a good clue to what was going on, but not understood until the students said, "Awesome work, Professor Stanton!".
Comment Written 21-May-2024
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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You get me!! No review feels better than when a reader does that. Thank you for this perfect review. I couldn't appreciate it more. xo
Comment from Jessica Wheeler
Ohhh, I just love a good twist! I knew this would be brilliant, and I LOVE being right! ;)
The story was exceptionally written, with each sentence rich in vivid imagery that immerses you in this naughty little hunter's world. The power dynamics were incredible, and I LOVED how you conveyed his "need for validation"! You have such a skillful way of phrasing, weaving humor and sensuality through every detail. The title alone had me shushing my kids! lol
Sexy, classy, and well worth a six! Fantastic job, beautiful!
Xo
Jess
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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Ohhh, I just love a good twist! I knew this would be brilliant, and I LOVE being right! ;)
The story was exceptionally written, with each sentence rich in vivid imagery that immerses you in this naughty little hunter's world. The power dynamics were incredible, and I LOVED how you conveyed his "need for validation"! You have such a skillful way of phrasing, weaving humor and sensuality through every detail. The title alone had me shushing my kids! lol
Sexy, classy, and well worth a six! Fantastic job, beautiful!
Xo
Jess
Comment Written 21-May-2024
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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Oh, no WONDER I just love it when I see your name in my Reviewer inbox! Thank you for these oh-so validating and encouraging comments. I enjoyed every single one.
xoxo
Comment from Daylily
Of course, this is brilliant, Rachelle.
While I usually skip over erotic postings, the title of this one hit home due to a recent personal experience. -- The serviceman that is here at our apartment complex on Mondays had expressed an interest in a stray cat that was showing up a lot. Several of our resident cat lovers are trying to find it a home. (I took in a stray a few years ago and she is a perfectly wonderful little friend.)
Anyway, two weeks ago, the young maintenance man and I were chatting about the little cat, and he starting getting a bit frisky. He said, "I hope you don't mind me flirting with you." I immediately laughed and told him, "I'm 80. You can flirt all you want." Then I laughed again as I turned and went back to my apartment. I have not seen him since so he must have changed his time schedule.
The twist ending to your story is perfect, my friend. I am positive you are going to do very well in the contest!!!
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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Of course, this is brilliant, Rachelle.
While I usually skip over erotic postings, the title of this one hit home due to a recent personal experience. -- The serviceman that is here at our apartment complex on Mondays had expressed an interest in a stray cat that was showing up a lot. Several of our resident cat lovers are trying to find it a home. (I took in a stray a few years ago and she is a perfectly wonderful little friend.)
Anyway, two weeks ago, the young maintenance man and I were chatting about the little cat, and he starting getting a bit frisky. He said, "I hope you don't mind me flirting with you." I immediately laughed and told him, "I'm 80. You can flirt all you want." Then I laughed again as I turned and went back to my apartment. I have not seen him since so he must have changed his time schedule.
The twist ending to your story is perfect, my friend. I am positive you are going to do very well in the contest!!!
Comment Written 21-May-2024
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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What a sweet vignette!! You might be chronologically eighty, Lily; but you have the spunk and charm of a twenty-something!!!
Thank you for this really delightful review. Very much appreciated. xoxo
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You're most welcome!! :-)
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Comment from Bill Schott
This is quite the lesson in communicating between the persona of Danny Donjuan and the instructor who sits with the dangerous knowledge of experience and expectation. Neat.
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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This is quite the lesson in communicating between the persona of Danny Donjuan and the instructor who sits with the dangerous knowledge of experience and expectation. Neat.
Comment Written 21-May-2024
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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Nicely put!!! Thanks for this excellent review. xo
Comment from Wayne Fowler
In order to better 'earn' the warning labels, you might add... noticing the waning of his throbbing bulge.
I love your word choices and construction: sprite, languorously, jaws of time, fawns over my body, and more
Tastefully written. Great work.
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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In order to better 'earn' the warning labels, you might add... noticing the waning of his throbbing bulge.
I love your word choices and construction: sprite, languorously, jaws of time, fawns over my body, and more
Tastefully written. Great work.
Comment Written 21-May-2024
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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HHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!! Omg, Wayne!! You slay me.
I actually had to list it as Erotica/Adult Content, per the contest rules...and gawd knows I'm a rule follower. **Wayne spits out his coffee then erupts in laughter**
Anyway, thank you for starting out my day just right. xoxo
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laughy face here
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Rachelle,
this is certainly worthy of a six, but I'm out already. This was incredibly sensual without crossing the line into nasty. I truly enjoyed reading this. It was exciting and funny at the same time. Very masterful gal. Well done.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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Hello Rachelle,
this is certainly worthy of a six, but I'm out already. This was incredibly sensual without crossing the line into nasty. I truly enjoyed reading this. It was exciting and funny at the same time. Very masterful gal. Well done.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
Comment Written 21-May-2024
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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This is a very helpful and encouraging review, Tom. Thank you! xo
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is good, very much a hunter's method of luring his panther prey within his reach. His subject apparently plans to take him up on his hunt another time. Lucky guy with skills.
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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This is good, very much a hunter's method of luring his panther prey within his reach. His subject apparently plans to take him up on his hunt another time. Lucky guy with skills.
Comment Written 20-May-2024
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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Thanks, Carol. I appreciate the encouragement here and kind words. xo
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Ouch. You put the kettle on the stove, turning the temp to a near boil and then leave it to steam without ever crossing over to let it steep. And some say I have a naughty mind. Well done.
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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Ouch. You put the kettle on the stove, turning the temp to a near boil and then leave it to steam without ever crossing over to let it steep. And some say I have a naughty mind. Well done.
Comment Written 20-May-2024
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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thanks
Comment from Jill D
Hi Rachelle, this was so enjoyable it had everything. It was clever funny and erotic but not to the extent where my toes went red..Lol. The twist was brilliant. I feel so privileged to be among such talented writers and you are definitely up there with the greats.
All the best.
Jill:)
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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Hi Rachelle, this was so enjoyable it had everything. It was clever funny and erotic but not to the extent where my toes went red..Lol. The twist was brilliant. I feel so privileged to be among such talented writers and you are definitely up there with the greats.
All the best.
Jill:)
Comment Written 20-May-2024
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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Oh, you SWEET TALKIN' REVIEWER, you!! Thank you for this lovely encouragement! Very much appreciated.. xo
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Credit where credit's due... plus I have kissed the Blarney Stone... LOL!;)
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HAHAHAHAHA. Now THAT's really funny.
