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a sonnet
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Comment from
Debbie D'Arcy
Some very evocative pastoral imagery here in-keeping with the country idyll once so prevalent prior to industrialisation. I like the opening and the sun slicing through the summer haze and the personification of the sleepy pond. It's as if in a dream world, waking up gently from its slumber, the "yellow tassels," also a delightful image, whirling as the wind blows. Your excellent sonnet compellingly draws me into this charming portrait of nature at its best. Well done and good luck! Debbie
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Comment Written 13-May-2024
reply by the author on 13-May-2024
Thank you very much, Debbie, for sharing my sonnet. So pleased my imagery could put you there.
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