Her Lovely Mess
About a friend who is an organized keeper35 total reviews
Comment from royowen
I think there's a little bit of hoarding in all of us, but some will actually fill up a house with so much stuff they have no room to move, it's quite a disease, hard to cure, what a wonderful ballad style poem, well donr, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
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I think there's a little bit of hoarding in all of us, but some will actually fill up a house with so much stuff they have no room to move, it's quite a disease, hard to cure, what a wonderful ballad style poem, well donr, blessings Roy
Comment Written 27-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
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Roy, I believe you are right, but her mess is restricted to containers and all upstairs in her house. So thanks for your kind comments for this poem. It means a lot to me.
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Well done
Comment from jessizero
I enjoyed this poem! I am glad that your friend is not a hoarder, but you told a great story about her mess. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
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I enjoyed this poem! I am glad that your friend is not a hoarder, but you told a great story about her mess. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
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Jessi, thanks for your kind comments for this mess poem. It means a lot to me
Comment from zanya
So well told here, the situation with regard to hoarding and not being able to let go, or putting it another way, finding a reason to hold on to 'stuff'- a reflection on both sides of the argument.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
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So well told here, the situation with regard to hoarding and not being able to let go, or putting it another way, finding a reason to hold on to 'stuff'- a reflection on both sides of the argument.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
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Hi Zanya, thanks for your kind comments for this poem. It means a lot to me, along with your six stars. Thank you so very much.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I think I recognise this write:)) I love the way you've found so many superb rhymes for 'mess' and incorporated them into this very relatable story of a hoarder, the sort all of us know! It really seems to be a case of out of sight, out of mind. A great entry! Good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
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I think I recognise this write:)) I love the way you've found so many superb rhymes for 'mess' and incorporated them into this very relatable story of a hoarder, the sort all of us know! It really seems to be a case of out of sight, out of mind. A great entry! Good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 27-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
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Hi Debbie, this friend that I speak of has her treasures stored in bins and put in stacks in the upstairs or her house. I was surprised that people could be judgmental even hearing that throwing was like a disease for her after living a tragic life. When I think of a hoarder, I think of a person with garbage piled high and someone with a house unlike hers. But that's what happens when you enter a contest called a mess. LOL
Comment from gramalot8
I have to laugh because just a couple of days ago my cousin was talking about the things she's saving for after the days she is gone... hoping her kids will want them.
They might... might not...
For me... recently I have been going through things and having my kids and grandkids take things now... so I know what they want and can enjoy seeing it and watch them enjoying these things while I am alive and can share it with them. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
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I have to laugh because just a couple of days ago my cousin was talking about the things she's saving for after the days she is gone... hoping her kids will want them.
They might... might not...
For me... recently I have been going through things and having my kids and grandkids take things now... so I know what they want and can enjoy seeing it and watch them enjoying these things while I am alive and can share it with them. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
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Hi gramalot. I do the same thing, but kids don't seem to want those treasures anymore. But thanks for your kind comments for this poem. It means a lot to me
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi
This is a well written poem using repetition well to emphasize her mess.
At least it really isn't hoarding and is confined to the attic. Some of those things would be interesting to see. I think this is true of a lot of once poor people.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest.
Hope your having a good weekend.
Joan
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
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Hi
This is a well written poem using repetition well to emphasize her mess.
At least it really isn't hoarding and is confined to the attic. Some of those things would be interesting to see. I think this is true of a lot of once poor people.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest.
Hope your having a good weekend.
Joan
Comment Written 27-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
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Joan, thanks for your kind comments for this poem. It means a lot to me
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You're very welcome, Debi.
Joan
Comment from joann r romei
I was just thinking of how much we all accumulate throughout the years and yes, everything has a memory and an attachment to a special time regarding loved ones.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
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I was just thinking of how much we all accumulate throughout the years and yes, everything has a memory and an attachment to a special time regarding loved ones.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
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Joann, thanks for your kind comments for this poem. It means a lot to me
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a great poem about a mess. Well put together it has a great flow and rhyme. Awesome photo to compliment your words as well. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024
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This is a great poem about a mess. Well put together it has a great flow and rhyme. Awesome photo to compliment your words as well. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024
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Awe, thank you Joanne for such a lovely review and comments. I appreciate it so very much. And thanks for the good luck wish too, dear friend.
Comment from Ulla
This poem really made me smile. Yes old habits are difficult to get rid of. Especially if you you've experienced poverty. Then I can imagine it would be difficult to throw anything away. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
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This poem really made me smile. Yes old habits are difficult to get rid of. Especially if you you've experienced poverty. Then I can imagine it would be difficult to throw anything away. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 27-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
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Ulla, thanks for your kind comments for this poem. It means a lot to me
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the What a Mess writing prompt. Some call it organized keeping. Some call it hoarding. I call it sad for those who end up with it after the "collector" leaves this Earth. I can speak because my family has an entire farm full of stuff left here by a family member. Nicely written poem. Good luck.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
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An excellent entry for the What a Mess writing prompt. Some call it organized keeping. Some call it hoarding. I call it sad for those who end up with it after the "collector" leaves this Earth. I can speak because my family has an entire farm full of stuff left here by a family member. Nicely written poem. Good luck.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
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Hi Marilyn, you wouldn't think it so sad if you saw what those kids will inherit that is so neatly packed away in those bins upstairs. Sorry for your family's ordeal. Ugh, that would be awful... But thanks for your kind comments for this poem. It means a lot to me
