I Wonder
A 5-7-5 Poem23 total reviews
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Food for thought. You have grand ideas. Ever thought of writing science fiction? The poetry is good and the picture shines on the feeling of the poem. Karen
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Food for thought. You have grand ideas. Ever thought of writing science fiction? The poetry is good and the picture shines on the feeling of the poem. Karen
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much, I am trying/learning to write prose, I have a problem with grammar and punctuation, I have written a couple of short flash types, I will get there, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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:-)
Comment from Wendy G
A very good question. We have little wisdom for what we should be doing, and instead we are developing systems to make us increasingly irrelevant. A thoughtful poem, and an excellent entry for the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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A very good question. We have little wisdom for what we should be doing, and instead we are developing systems to make us increasingly irrelevant. A thoughtful poem, and an excellent entry for the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Wendy, yes, I think we all need to keep our eyes on things, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a beautifully written poem. It has a nice overall presentation. Very lovely photo to compliment your words as well. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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This is a beautifully written poem. It has a nice overall presentation. Very lovely photo to compliment your words as well. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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Your welcome
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork to go with your poem;
a nice presentation, as well.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-You establish a good premise in the first two lines,
and ask a good question in the last one.
-I think it relates to the saying that if
you change one thing, then many more will change
because of it.
-A good entry; good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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-Very nice artwork to go with your poem;
a nice presentation, as well.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-You establish a good premise in the first two lines,
and ask a good question in the last one.
-I think it relates to the saying that if
you change one thing, then many more will change
because of it.
-A good entry; good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Thank you so very much for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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You are very welcome, kahpot.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the 5-7-5 poetry contest. This poem asks a good question and it seems to me that we are destined to find out because on a daily basis man is forsaking the tree of knowledge and trying to write lessons that were learned long ago. Nicely done. Good luck.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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An excellent entry for the 5-7-5 poetry contest. This poem asks a good question and it seems to me that we are destined to find out because on a daily basis man is forsaking the tree of knowledge and trying to write lessons that were learned long ago. Nicely done. Good luck.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Thank you so very much for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from June Sargent
Good question. We seem to be forging ahead blindly, with no concern over how close we are to the edge of the cliff. A thought-provoking entry for the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Good question. We seem to be forging ahead blindly, with no concern over how close we are to the edge of the cliff. A thought-provoking entry for the contest.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Kahpot, a thought-provoking poem and good 5-7-5 format. Of note:
forsakes the tree of knowledge
(As the song says "In the Year 2525" ... man has nothing to do, some machine is doing it for you. I have wondered, if by using the internet for answer and solutions to problem, will man's brain and thinking capacity decline as well.)
Well done. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. Margaret
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Hi Kahpot, a thought-provoking poem and good 5-7-5 format. Of note:
forsakes the tree of knowledge
(As the song says "In the Year 2525" ... man has nothing to do, some machine is doing it for you. I have wondered, if by using the internet for answer and solutions to problem, will man's brain and thinking capacity decline as well.)
Well done. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. Margaret
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Magaret, yes, the machines seem to be the number one priority, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Jasmine Girl
You are so right. I have hearing that after the AI takes over, we will be lucky if we are treated like chimpanzees just like how we treated them: putting them in zoos or letting them run wild in the jungle.
Well done and good luck.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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You are so right. I have hearing that after the AI takes over, we will be lucky if we are treated like chimpanzees just like how we treated them: putting them in zoos or letting them run wild in the jungle.
Well done and good luck.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from GoWiSt
Nice picture artwork.
You successfully fulfilled the line and syllable requirements for the poem/contest.
Indeed, indeed, may mankind's journey not forsake the tree of knowledge, for it will not bode well for him in time (extinction of the dominant species?)
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Nice picture artwork.
You successfully fulfilled the line and syllable requirements for the poem/contest.
Indeed, indeed, may mankind's journey not forsake the tree of knowledge, for it will not bode well for him in time (extinction of the dominant species?)
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from jessizero
I enjoyed this 5-7-5 poem. You got the syllable count correct, and I liked your subject matter. Your message was great. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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I enjoyed this 5-7-5 poem. You got the syllable count correct, and I liked your subject matter. Your message was great. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot