Consequences
When the party is over.19 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
A clever play on words with your first and third rhymes, both linked appropriately to the middle line. Well illustrated too. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
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A clever play on words with your first and third rhymes, both linked appropriately to the middle line. Well illustrated too. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Wendy, but I am no poet. Struggling to keep my head above the surface! Ha.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the 1-6-1 poem writing prompt. I especially like the dual use of the words ale/ail. Very creative. Nice artwork to go with it. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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An excellent entry for the 1-6-1 poem writing prompt. I especially like the dual use of the words ale/ail. Very creative. Nice artwork to go with it. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Stiff competition. I expect nothing less from my fellow Fanstorians! Stay frothy!
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Oh, isn't THAT the truth!! I do not have anywhere NEAR the capacity to withstand alcohol in these, my Golden Years! One anything - wine, wine cooler, shot of Kahlua - and I honest-to-goodness feel it. Halfway through a second, and I START GETTING A LITTLE LOUD AND EMBARRASSING. Moral: pay attention to this contest entry, and accept your fate!
Best of luck to you in the contest! xo
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Oh, isn't THAT the truth!! I do not have anywhere NEAR the capacity to withstand alcohol in these, my Golden Years! One anything - wine, wine cooler, shot of Kahlua - and I honest-to-goodness feel it. Halfway through a second, and I START GETTING A LITTLE LOUD AND EMBARRASSING. Moral: pay attention to this contest entry, and accept your fate!
Best of luck to you in the contest! xo
Comment Written 05-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Well then?let?s get a drink! Ha! I?m the funniest person I know.
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Not if I'm drinking with you; then I'M the funniest person, like, EVVVVVVV. ERRRRRR!!!
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Touché
Comment from Raul1
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It is well written. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No mistakes found. I like it. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It is well written. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No mistakes found. I like it. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 05-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Thanks, friend!
Comment from hullabaloo22
This 1-6-1 poem is very challenging. You not only managed all the requirements for the competition but did so in a way that made sense.
Great choice of picture too.
Wishing you the best of luck!
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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This 1-6-1 poem is very challenging. You not only managed all the requirements for the competition but did so in a way that made sense.
Great choice of picture too.
Wishing you the best of luck!
Comment Written 05-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Thanks! It is doing well!
Comment from Mark Jackson
This ring terrible and true. I went out to my favourite bar who now sell Belgian beer and had an eight per cent imperial stout on tap. I partied and failed to get home in a timely fashion and in the morning I was ailing. Well done, and good luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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This ring terrible and true. I went out to my favourite bar who now sell Belgian beer and had an eight per cent imperial stout on tap. I partied and failed to get home in a timely fashion and in the morning I was ailing. Well done, and good luck in the competition.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Ha! Seems to be hitting home with a lot of us!
Comment from Julie Helms
You just got my vote. Thanks so much for the college memories, an education wasted, but otherwise time well spent. Lol! Syllable count/rhyme all good.
Best of luck!
Julie :-)
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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You just got my vote. Thanks so much for the college memories, an education wasted, but otherwise time well spent. Lol! Syllable count/rhyme all good.
Best of luck!
Julie :-)
Comment Written 05-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Thanks for the kind words and much appreciated vote!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Too much drinking and we pay the price for it and I enjoyed your few words to remind us of the hang overs we suffer through drinking alcohol, a fun post, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Too much drinking and we pay the price for it and I enjoyed your few words to remind us of the hang overs we suffer through drinking alcohol, a fun post, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 05-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Maybe too much fun!
Comment from kahpot
Ha! Ha! very fitting, and well presented, though if I may, I think the prompt rules say that all lines must rhyme, you may want to check on this, though don't edit too much, if possible, best wishes****kahpot
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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
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Ha! Ha! very fitting, and well presented, though if I may, I think the prompt rules say that all lines must rhyme, you may want to check on this, though don't edit too much, if possible, best wishes****kahpot
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Comment Written 04-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
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Oh crap, you saved my butt. I did t see that. Now I think it is even better. Thanks!!!
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Well done