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The results of the war that took place in heaven43 total reviews
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Nomi, a poem of truth and wisdom. Great scripture choice. Of note:
Not one single day will you be missed.
You'll be confined for one thousand years,
(Perhaps, even longer ... into the eternity of hell.)
Great photo choice. A poem that needed to be shared. Well done.
Margaret
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Hi Nomi, a poem of truth and wisdom. Great scripture choice. Of note:
Not one single day will you be missed.
You'll be confined for one thousand years,
(Perhaps, even longer ... into the eternity of hell.)
Great photo choice. A poem that needed to be shared. Well done.
Margaret
Comment Written 06-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Thank you Margaret. I did not disclose this to any of my other reviewers, but this poem woke me up and I hurried to write it down. I subjected it to many edits , as I tried to cut it down to a readable entry.
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
You've done a nice job of taking the verses from Revelations and sharing them in poetic form.
I had to read it twice to get it to flow better, slowing down my reading in order to capture the words better.
It's nice to see you posting again. Take care.
xo
Pam
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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You've done a nice job of taking the verses from Revelations and sharing them in poetic form.
I had to read it twice to get it to flow better, slowing down my reading in order to capture the words better.
It's nice to see you posting again. Take care.
xo
Pam
Comment Written 06-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Thank you Pam, I failed to mention to mist of the reviewers that this poem woke me up and as I hurried to write it down, I was already contemplating future edits prior to submitting it.
Comment from estory
I think it's a great testament of faith. The firmness of the voice is a demonstration of your convictions. And there's also lots of hope in it; sort of like the hope you hang onto when you see a storm cloud coming. You look forward to the peace that comes afterward. Or maybe the hope you look for when there is a war underway, and you look forward to winning that war. estory
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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I think it's a great testament of faith. The firmness of the voice is a demonstration of your convictions. And there's also lots of hope in it; sort of like the hope you hang onto when you see a storm cloud coming. You look forward to the peace that comes afterward. Or maybe the hope you look for when there is a war underway, and you look forward to winning that war. estory
Comment Written 06-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much for your kind and supportive comments.
Comment from Michele Harber
This is an excellent poem, in large part because you managed to make it sound so conversational in tone while still employing rhyme and rhythm beautifully. By doing it this way, you made it very easy to understand, and direct enough that even younger readers would pick up on its message.
Relaying it as something G-d said directly to Satan made an already strong piece that much more powerful.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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This is an excellent poem, in large part because you managed to make it sound so conversational in tone while still employing rhyme and rhythm beautifully. By doing it this way, you made it very easy to understand, and direct enough that even younger readers would pick up on its message.
Relaying it as something G-d said directly to Satan made an already strong piece that much more powerful.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Thank you. Your comments bring joy to my heart. I believe the scriptures are important when viewed as a letter from God. They reveal not only the history of his dealings with us, but also his hopes and plans for our future.
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Beautifully said!
Comment from Heather Knight
This is comforting and beautifully written.
I want to be optimistic too: not only for myself, but mainly for my children and my wee granddaughter.
Thanks for sharing your beautiful poetry.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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This is comforting and beautifully written.
I want to be optimistic too: not only for myself, but mainly for my children and my wee granddaughter.
Thanks for sharing your beautiful poetry.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Thank you. I do believe that God has an awesomely good future for the people he created and allowed to descend from the once perfect couple, Adam and Eve.
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I want to believe that too, but sometimes everything that's going on in the world at the moment worries me. I try to avoid the news. Selfish, I know.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Naomi, thank you so much for sharing this poem with us. I'm glad you.have your strong belief, which Is completely lack. I can't really remember if I've ever really believed in any of it. I believe in peace, though and I'm hard pushed to find any wherever I look. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
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Hi Naomi, thank you so much for sharing this poem with us. I'm glad you.have your strong belief, which Is completely lack. I can't really remember if I've ever really believed in any of it. I believe in peace, though and I'm hard pushed to find any wherever I look. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 06-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
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Belief is a purely personal matter. I would be hard pressed to try to force anyone to believe based om what my own beliefs are. I truly hope that you find a belief source that works for you.
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That is so true. I totally agree with you. :))
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Thank you.
Comment from QC Poet
The scripture before your poem clearly shows that earthlings are being lead to misbelief and it's our Souls that are in danger if we lose faith and join in sinful things
Thank you for Sharing your poem and faith
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
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The scripture before your poem clearly shows that earthlings are being lead to misbelief and it's our Souls that are in danger if we lose faith and join in sinful things
Thank you for Sharing your poem and faith
Comment Written 06-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
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Thank you. My only hope is that I can do whatever I can to help people understand the truth found in the scripture.
Comment from godlucifer
this was a battle to be taken. taken is taken from god. taken is taken from hell. this was an all out battle of war. your poem was written with a talent. thanks for the read.
truly
godlucifer
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
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this was a battle to be taken. taken is taken from god. taken is taken from hell. this was an all out battle of war. your poem was written with a talent. thanks for the read.
truly
godlucifer
Comment Written 06-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
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Your pen name makes me wonder which side you are on regarding this battle. LOL.
Comment from LJbutterfly
Your poem thoroughly and adequately describes in rhyme, the scripture detailing the events in Heaven that resulted in earth being scared by the presence of the devil. As believers, all we have to do is repent for our sins, have faith in Christ and know He has redeemed us and accepts us as His own.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Your poem thoroughly and adequately describes in rhyme, the scripture detailing the events in Heaven that resulted in earth being scared by the presence of the devil. As believers, all we have to do is repent for our sins, have faith in Christ and know He has redeemed us and accepts us as His own.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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And yet man refuse to do so, holding on instead to the false hope that Hollywood sells them.
Comment from Douglas Goff
Yes indeed, come what may. Were it that we all had the faith of Job.
Great reflection on Revelations by the way !
This piece is strong, powerful, poignant.
Well done!
D
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Yes indeed, come what may. Were it that we all had the faith of Job.
Great reflection on Revelations by the way !
This piece is strong, powerful, poignant.
Well done!
D
Comment Written 05-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Thank you D. I appreciate your support and your fine comments.