Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

This is really a sensuous poem. And I was surprised that "amber" has a scent. I guess it's used in perfumery? I just know about the stone. The narrator is really in love with her beloved.

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024

I love amber. It comes in a wooden box. It has the texture of brown sugar. You can also get it in body oil. Amber is an alluring, woody fragrance oil with bold musk aromas.

Thank you very much, big sister.

Love

Marival

Comment from Brenda Strauser

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your poem. It is well written. The picture at the top matches the poem. The picture adds a nice touch to the poem. I like the words you used in the poem. Great job

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 Comment Written 22-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024

Thank you very much, Brenda.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from Jodi Ann Anderson

Excellent

Ooooh! Sexy! Very nice! I enjoyed reading this. There's some nice imagery with this poem! I love how you start talking about moonbeams caressing every inch. Great job!

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 Comment Written 22-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2024

Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words.

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