Comment from royowen

Excellent

I can actually remember how painful it was when my first love actually dumped me, all those years, but I married well by the grace of God, a good thing for my children and a bounty for my grandchildren beautifully written Gypsy, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend.

Gypsy hugs

reply by royowen on 10-Feb-2024

You too

Comment from Douglas Goff

Excellent

Well that is such a sad prologue to the upcoming holiday.

Great coloring scheme and I loved this descriptive powerful line:

of a fractured heart and a tethered soul

Another wonderful piece! You really are a magical unicorn.
Douglas

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 Comment Written 09-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024

I like to be a magical unicorn. LoL

Sorry about the sad prologue, it's for those people who are not in romantic relationships... I'm sure there are a few in fanstory. True love should be celebrated every day. Valentine's day is another way to make money. But of course, it will be a happy and fun day for many. I hope you have a magical day, darlin'

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Magical Gypsy hugs!

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

so true!! it's so commercialized, too! plus, why save your love for one freaking day?

anyway... a great, thought-provoking free verse with nice imagery and smooth flow

thank you for sharing
shelley :)


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 Comment Written 09-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2024

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs