Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is a very well written, central poem that you have created. It was a joy to listen to, and it flows smoothly when read aloud I wish you the very best with all of your writing and may you have a wonderful day.

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 Comment Written 08-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024

Thank you very much, my friend. I appreciate your review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs