The Call
Torment and solution.23 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
Thank you, thank you, my friend. I really needed this poem. The enemy is ramping up his attacks on everyone and everything, especially those who are godly or even conservative. A refreshing write and encouraging as we go deeper into the end times. I feel the Lord's coming is soon. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal :))
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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Thank you, thank you, my friend. I really needed this poem. The enemy is ramping up his attacks on everyone and everything, especially those who are godly or even conservative. A refreshing write and encouraging as we go deeper into the end times. I feel the Lord's coming is soon. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal :))
Comment Written 22-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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Thanks Sal. I'm blessed by the gift you so badly needed. This will be my last poem for awhile. I'm going to focus on Chapter 3 of Stone River next.
Comment from Janet Foor
I liked your poem. Roy is always a great inspiration to me as well.
We do live in dark times but....we have read the end of His book and so we know how the story ends.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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I liked your poem. Roy is always a great inspiration to me as well.
We do live in dark times but....we have read the end of His book and so we know how the story ends.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 22-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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Thank you so much for the blessings, Janet. Yes, we do know how the story ends and, that will be a glorious day!
This will be my last poem for awhile. I'm going to focus on Chapter 3 of Stone River next.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is rather scary, but then our world is scary. Too many things pull people away from goodness and leaves them mired in darkness, the wolf pack awaits all those who stray from the lambs that Jesus protects. Lovely poem that would fit into many of the religious publications very nicely.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2024
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This is rather scary, but then our world is scary. Too many things pull people away from goodness and leaves them mired in darkness, the wolf pack awaits all those who stray from the lambs that Jesus protects. Lovely poem that would fit into many of the religious publications very nicely.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2024
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Thank you so much, Carol. Your review means a lot to me. And, I appreciate the suggestion it would be worthy of publication. Do you have any particular publication in mind?
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I think you might find Writer's Digest on line or in a library as it may still be an expensive book. They have dozens of listings for religious magazines and online mags. You might just try a search for "writing--religious markets". Read what they buy carefully, but poetry always seemed to be needed when I didn't know how to write poetry and still don't know much about it. Best of luck in your search.
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Thank you for the advice, I will check it out tomorrow.
Comment from QC Poet
Interesting and a Great Warning contained within this posting. I am also a big fan of Mr. Ownen, I can get a related message feeling with your posting Thanks for Sharing and God Bless you for Sharing
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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Interesting and a Great Warning contained within this posting. I am also a big fan of Mr. Ownen, I can get a related message feeling with your posting Thanks for Sharing and God Bless you for Sharing
Comment Written 22-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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Thank you so much for the blessing, QC. This will be my last poem for a while. I'm going to focus on Chapter 3 of Stone River next.
Comment from Jeano
It says you're an accomplished poet. Well, I'm not going to argue with that! I loved this piece. Looking at the accompanying photo, I didn't know what to expect but I was pleasantly surprised. You have a gift. Thank you for writing this and sharing it. No room for improvement on this one.
My best,
Jeano
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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It says you're an accomplished poet. Well, I'm not going to argue with that! I loved this piece. Looking at the accompanying photo, I didn't know what to expect but I was pleasantly surprised. You have a gift. Thank you for writing this and sharing it. No room for improvement on this one.
My best,
Jeano
Comment Written 22-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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Thank you so much, Jeano. This will be my last poem for awhile. I'm going to focus on Chapter 3 of Stone River next.
Comment from Ulla
Well, bad times and bad influences has been throughout mankind, and I suppose that will unfortunately never change. Right now we are living in some dark moments. I liked your poem. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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Well, bad times and bad influences has been throughout mankind, and I suppose that will unfortunately never change. Right now we are living in some dark moments. I liked your poem. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 22-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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Thank you, Ulla. This will be my last poem for awhile. I'm going to focus on Chapter 3 of Stone River next.
Comment from papa55mike
Yes, they will fall and take as many as they can with them. I've noticed the hatred and bigotry increase recently. What a wonderfully written poem. Best of luck with your writing!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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Yes, they will fall and take as many as they can with them. I've noticed the hatred and bigotry increase recently. What a wonderfully written poem. Best of luck with your writing!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 22-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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Thank you, Pappa Mike. This will be my last poem for awhile. I'm going to focus on Chapter 3 of Stone River Next.
Comment from Allieas
This was a beautiful poem. Your words flowed in such a seamlessly way, it was satisfying to read each word and hear them in my mind's voice. You describe the depths of darkness and the pinnacle of lightness so well. Thanks for sharing this.
Alex
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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This was a beautiful poem. Your words flowed in such a seamlessly way, it was satisfying to read each word and hear them in my mind's voice. You describe the depths of darkness and the pinnacle of lightness so well. Thanks for sharing this.
Alex
Comment Written 22-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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Hello Alex. Thank you for this touching review. This will be my last poem for awhile. I'm going to focus on Chapter 3 of Stone River next. I hope you follow along.
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Very nice poem. Great sentiment and message.
I especially enjoy the first stanza, I can both see, and hear it. And the last stanza sums it up. Good work.
And best wishes.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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Very nice poem. Great sentiment and message.
I especially enjoy the first stanza, I can both see, and hear it. And the last stanza sums it up. Good work.
And best wishes.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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Thank you, Wayne. This will be my last poem for awhile. I'm going to focus on Chapter 3 of Stone River next.
Comment from Annmuma
A spell-binding poem that holds one's interest from the beginning to the end. The descriptions are acute and the words are strong, as is the passion exposed. Good job. ann
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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A spell-binding poem that holds one's interest from the beginning to the end. The descriptions are acute and the words are strong, as is the passion exposed. Good job. ann
Comment Written 22-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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Thank you, Ann. This will be my last poem for awhile. I'm going to focus on Chapter 3 of Stone River next.