Poems
This about sums it up.15 total reviews
Comment from leather
Sometimes, poems write themselves, and sometimes, they are elusive when coming into existence--darn it. In either case, you have given a good lineup of how their origins can come about and the topics they might encompass. A centered text placement might improve the visual impact, but you used a nice-sized font.
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2023
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Sometimes, poems write themselves, and sometimes, they are elusive when coming into existence--darn it. In either case, you have given a good lineup of how their origins can come about and the topics they might encompass. A centered text placement might improve the visual impact, but you used a nice-sized font.
Best wishes.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2023
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Thanks a lot. Jen.
Comment from Janis M.
I would agree. Poetry for the most part is a summation of our thoughts and feelings which is why, I have found that offering critique is so difficult, because often it is impossible to say anything nice enough for someone to not take offense. Even for myself, it never feels great, but it's the only way to improve. I refuse to not be honest though. I'm willing to have someone mad at me, to offer constructive feedback. Of course what they do with it is their responsibility after that.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023
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I would agree. Poetry for the most part is a summation of our thoughts and feelings which is why, I have found that offering critique is so difficult, because often it is impossible to say anything nice enough for someone to not take offense. Even for myself, it never feels great, but it's the only way to improve. I refuse to not be honest though. I'm willing to have someone mad at me, to offer constructive feedback. Of course what they do with it is their responsibility after that.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023
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Many thanks. Jen
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is beautiful! You have used effective imagery and expressive words to explain poems. Writers here, like myself, will relate to, and value, this. Thank you for sharing this!
Best wishes,
Alex
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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023
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This is beautiful! You have used effective imagery and expressive words to explain poems. Writers here, like myself, will relate to, and value, this. Thank you for sharing this!
Best wishes,
Alex
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Comment Written 16-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023
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Thank you so much Alex.
Comment from Sally Law
Loving this no rules poetry contest entry, my friend. A lovely offering in alternate rhyming verse.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sal XOs
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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023
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Loving this no rules poetry contest entry, my friend. A lovely offering in alternate rhyming verse.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sal XOs
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Comment Written 16-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023
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Thank you so much Sally, my friend. Take care. Jen. X
Comment from Lisa Cuff
Love this poem! Poetry does have the tendency to find its way to paper before we know the pen leaked any ink. I also like the flower poem in the picture.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023
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Love this poem! Poetry does have the tendency to find its way to paper before we know the pen leaked any ink. I also like the flower poem in the picture.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023
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Thank you so much for the great review and super stars. Jen. X
