2023 Gypsy's Tanka
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Comment from kahpot
That first one we will always remember, unlike many other firsts, the yearnings and for me the nervousness are still there, an excellent pair of tankas, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2023
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That first one we will always remember, unlike many other firsts, the yearnings and for me the nervousness are still there, an excellent pair of tankas, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 27-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
We all remember our first, true passionate love. I think of mine from time to time, and feel extraordinarily lucky that I had two years with a man who made me feel so alive.
A beautiful overall presentation here, as always. Memories can be wonderful:-)
xo
Pam
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
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We all remember our first, true passionate love. I think of mine from time to time, and feel extraordinarily lucky that I had two years with a man who made me feel so alive.
A beautiful overall presentation here, as always. Memories can be wonderful:-)
xo
Pam
Comment Written 26-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
I think I remember you telling me of your first kiss that was electrifying and you always remembered that feeling. I'm glad you record those "tingle sparks" which still "ignite feelings in a sea of time" so many years later. You experienced such a level of passion that few people do!
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
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I think I remember you telling me of your first kiss that was electrifying and you always remembered that feeling. I'm glad you record those "tingle sparks" which still "ignite feelings in a sea of time" so many years later. You experienced such a level of passion that few people do!
Comment Written 26-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
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He was very good to me. Sometimes I wonder what would have happened if I stayed in Spain. I am prety sure we would be married. I decided to move to the united states because I didn't have a home or job. When I want back to visit, he had a new girlfriend. I tried to call him a few times but couldn't find it. The first time his father got on the phone and told me to not call him again. I think he was really hurt when I left. I have looked in facebook but I can't find him. I just wonder what happened to him.
Thank you big sister.
love,
marival
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That's sad when you can't find someone like that and Spanish names are really hard to search! I wish he had stayed in tough with you!
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy....and the first time you fall in love you never forget, although I wish I could; still a source of total embarrassment. I had no clue!
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
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Another fine poem, Gypsy....and the first time you fall in love you never forget, although I wish I could; still a source of total embarrassment. I had no clue!
Comment Written 26-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
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LoL I know, it's too bad first love didn't come with instructions. Pedro and I did pretty well.
Thank you very much for the review.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from royowen
Youth is wasted on the young I've heard it said, and lately I've been thinking of my adventures when young, I think I was completely self absorbed back then, but I remember the passion. Beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
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Youth is wasted on the young I've heard it said, and lately I've been thinking of my adventures when young, I think I was completely self absorbed back then, but I remember the passion. Beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 26-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
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Thank you very much, my friend. May you have a wonderful night.
Gypsy hugs
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You too gypsy
Comment from Douglas Goff
Sounds like Pedro was a lucky fellow.
Another great piece of work. I like the multi-coloring that matches the pictures.
"tingle sparks". Nicely done.
Douglas.
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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
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Sounds like Pedro was a lucky fellow.
Another great piece of work. I like the multi-coloring that matches the pictures.
"tingle sparks". Nicely done.
Douglas.
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Comment Written 26-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
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Thank you very much, my friend. May you have a wonderful day.
Gypsy hugs