My Worst Fear ...
Standing Before the Bar of God17 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
Tom, This is a very interesting and well written entry you have penned for the My Worst Fear contest. It should be all of our worst fear. You used very good descriptive words and nice imagery to go with your words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
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Tom, This is a very interesting and well written entry you have penned for the My Worst Fear contest. It should be all of our worst fear. You used very good descriptive words and nice imagery to go with your words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 11-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
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I do worry a little about the when and where I might be headed if there is an afterlife, but all I can do is my best and repent when doing the stupid dance.
Comment from GWHARGIS
Oh lord, this is definitely a sobering piece of writing. I wonder if there is a higher court. I'm guessing if you make it to the "Supreme" court, you can't be all bad. Who knows. Maybe they won't throw the book at us. Great piece. Gretchen
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
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Oh lord, this is definitely a sobering piece of writing. I wonder if there is a higher court. I'm guessing if you make it to the "Supreme" court, you can't be all bad. Who knows. Maybe they won't throw the book at us. Great piece. Gretchen
Comment Written 11-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
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Thanks. I'd rather be wrong about an afterlife than to die and find out what I missed.
Comment from BethShelby
This is a good entry for the My Worst Fear contest. I think this might the worst fear for a lot of people, but I'd like to think that if we confess or sin and ask forgiveness that it moved to the depths of the sea never to be remembered again so at least the ones we asked forgivness for might not be on that TV screen. At least, I think there is something in the Bible that indicated that. Maybe you should ask for wine instead of a fifth.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
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This is a good entry for the My Worst Fear contest. I think this might the worst fear for a lot of people, but I'd like to think that if we confess or sin and ask forgiveness that it moved to the depths of the sea never to be remembered again so at least the ones we asked forgivness for might not be on that TV screen. At least, I think there is something in the Bible that indicated that. Maybe you should ask for wine instead of a fifth.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
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Manischewitz wine, perhaps. It's kosher.
As for the teevee screen the only views were from my recollection not the say so of another.
Comment from Barry Penfold
the highest court of all and no lawyer allowed. You did well to self represent and you must have been satisfied with knowing that he did have a waiting room available. Liked this a lot. Have a great day.
Regards
Barry Penfold
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
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the highest court of all and no lawyer allowed. You did well to self represent and you must have been satisfied with knowing that he did have a waiting room available. Liked this a lot. Have a great day.
Regards
Barry Penfold
Comment Written 11-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
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I can only hope.
Comment from Neo!
Such good descriptions, and I also liked the pictures that you chose. This is a greta idea to write about, and I liked how you compared it to a jury or a court of law the whole time. Great Job!
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
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Such good descriptions, and I also liked the pictures that you chose. This is a greta idea to write about, and I liked how you compared it to a jury or a court of law the whole time. Great Job!
Comment Written 11-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
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Thanks
Comment from JSD
An excellent moralistic / spiritual message, very well written. An excellent imaginary scenario made compelling by your engaging style. Well done and good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
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An excellent moralistic / spiritual message, very well written. An excellent imaginary scenario made compelling by your engaging style. Well done and good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 11-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
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Some say I have no style, but you and I know I do, though if describing it I would say off the cuff.
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Wearing your heart on your sleeve again!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We cannot hide from our wrong doings Tom as in the end we all pay for our deeds. I enjoyed your dialogue and your story here, the only thing to fear is our own history and hope we have kept our record clean, a fun post, love Dolly x x x
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We cannot hide from our wrong doings Tom as in the end we all pay for our deeds. I enjoyed your dialogue and your story here, the only thing to fear is our own history and hope we have kept our record clean, a fun post, love Dolly x x x
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Comment Written 11-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
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Absolutely.