Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

i loved making paper boats and paper airplanes then have them fight each other LOL!

a great haiku - and the pics with the moon and a balloon are perfect for the imagination!

thank you for sharing!
shelley :)




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 Comment Written 13-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2023

Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind feedback.

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Comment from LateBloomer

Excellent

Hi Gypsy, I love this poem. It made me smile. I could feel the joy of a child making a paper boat and launching it into the sea. Your poem reads and flows well and has good imagery and sensory appeal. Beautiful presentation and great photo choice. Well done. A happy poem. Xo. M

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 Comment Written 13-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2023

Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind feedback.

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