first meeting
Birds communicate by tweeting and singing13 total reviews
Comment from royowen
An excellent entry in this 1/6/1 poetry contest, a decidedly quirky work with the theme being the second one I'd come across, good rhyming, syllable count, and a good entry, good luck, blessings Roy
Typo : two birds()lovingly meet.
reply by the author on 26-May-2023
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An excellent entry in this 1/6/1 poetry contest, a decidedly quirky work with the theme being the second one I'd come across, good rhyming, syllable count, and a good entry, good luck, blessings Roy
Typo : two birds()lovingly meet.
Comment Written 26-May-2023
reply by the author on 26-May-2023
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Most welcome
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
It is sweet when two birds meet (I think bird's in your poem does not have to have the apostrophe - as it does not show possession).
I like the image, font color and size, and background for this poem. Good presentation.
Good luck in the contest.
Pam
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reply by the author on 26-May-2023
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It is sweet when two birds meet (I think bird's in your poem does not have to have the apostrophe - as it does not show possession).
I like the image, font color and size, and background for this poem. Good presentation.
Good luck in the contest.
Pam
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Comment Written 26-May-2023
reply by the author on 26-May-2023
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Thank you Pam 🙂
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
That's a cutie! Nicely done in this 1-6-1 with perfect syllable count and a lovely rhyming verse all contained in an attractive, eye-catching presentation. Thanks for sharing and good luck! Debbie
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reply by the author on 26-May-2023
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That's a cutie! Nicely done in this 1-6-1 with perfect syllable count and a lovely rhyming verse all contained in an attractive, eye-catching presentation. Thanks for sharing and good luck! Debbie
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Comment Written 26-May-2023
reply by the author on 26-May-2023
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Thank you so much Debbie 🙂