Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This poem, Seasons of the Mind III, presented with four AABB-rhymed quatrains, creates a sight for the readers of a morning when the pull of God on the planet is felt with every dew drop raised back up to the sky.

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023

Thanks Bill! 🙏🙏

Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell

Excellent

This poem has beautiful imagery and thought. I really like it. I have one suggestion: a different adjective that "musty." I know that means wet, but it's more a mildewed kind of damp, and your flowers indicate "fragrant." (If you get tired of my suggestions, just tell me!)

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 Comment Written 21-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023

Thanks Verna. Never👌👌👌👌

Comment from Tom Horonzy

Excellent

My, you sure have won a lot of ribbons, the last six months. You must be doing something right or have a ,assive clan of fans following you day and night. All that said, with no ill intent intended, this piece seems, as I read it, to be a little choppy. Don't ask me why, I ain't no college professor. ;-))
In addition, we are neighbors. You, thar in Flat Rock, near Carl Sandburg and mi down the mountain in Green Creek, Polk County. Hi neighbor!

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 Comment Written 21-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023

Thanks Tom, I did rush this I realize and plan to do a heavy edit! Thanks neighbor!

reply by Tom Horonzy on 21-Apr-2023

The meat is there. You need only to cleanse it from the bone.

reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023

Reposted a revision.