Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)

Excellent

What a powerful poem. I'm sure Dan will love it (at least he should do). I particularly found that the near repetitions of
>This love
>My/our/your love
gave the poem strength and structure. They drove it well. kay

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023

Thank you so much, Katherine!<3

Comment from Lea Tonin1

Excellent

This poem is Sweet and loving and definitely touching. Gives me the warm and fuzzies. It's nice when people can have such a love like that is becoming more and more rare every day. I congratulate you and I'm happy for you.. Having said that your phone is aesthetically pleasing the gorgeous picture of you and your man free of errors for grammar and spelling and sentence structure.
Very well written by a very challenged hand kudos to you! Best of luck to you in the contest have a good night!

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023

Aw thank you so much, Lea!!

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and good luck with your contest entry!
Doctor Ricky

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 Comment Written 05-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023

Thank you!!:)