You Didn't Ask...But
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Comment from BethShelby
As to the first part you post, I centainly don't want you to decide to leave FanStory. I would be very unhappy about not getting the rest of the story on The Unwanted Dog, which now seems to be very wanted dog. Lol
You are one of my favorite writers. I wasn't happen the $99. renewal but I rationlized it was less the $2.00 as week and kept me petty well entertained.
As to the You didn't Ask.. story. I think the kid needs to be put a way for a long time, but how he arrived at a state of having no regard for human life is likely not entirely his fault. Still he can't be out free to do it again. I'm glad you told the whole story here. The scary thing is there are others like him who haven't committed their crimes yet.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023
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As to the first part you post, I centainly don't want you to decide to leave FanStory. I would be very unhappy about not getting the rest of the story on The Unwanted Dog, which now seems to be very wanted dog. Lol
You are one of my favorite writers. I wasn't happen the $99. renewal but I rationlized it was less the $2.00 as week and kept me petty well entertained.
As to the You didn't Ask.. story. I think the kid needs to be put a way for a long time, but how he arrived at a state of having no regard for human life is likely not entirely his fault. Still he can't be out free to do it again. I'm glad you told the whole story here. The scary thing is there are others like him who haven't committed their crimes yet.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023
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Not sure what will do about staying or going. Still considering options. Appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Please don't leave, Brett. I want to know the rest of the story of "The Unwanted Dog." I wasn't sure about rejoining either. At 88 and in failing health I might not even survive the year. I haven't been able to write a poem for some time now, but what I have written is still out there as long as I am a member.
I say it again about Fucci, lock him up and throw away the key! He should not be let out into the world again. He is a MONSTER! Good job. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023
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Please don't leave, Brett. I want to know the rest of the story of "The Unwanted Dog." I wasn't sure about rejoining either. At 88 and in failing health I might not even survive the year. I haven't been able to write a poem for some time now, but what I have written is still out there as long as I am a member.
I say it again about Fucci, lock him up and throw away the key! He should not be let out into the world again. He is a MONSTER! Good job. Nancy:)
Comment Written 26-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023
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Have not decided what to do yet. Appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from Sarah Das Gupta
A very well written account and spine-chilling too. I shall be very disappointed if I can't finish 'Unwanted Dog' which is so educative and interesting, especially for someone with no first hand knowledge of USA!
Every best wish from Cambridge, UK
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023
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A very well written account and spine-chilling too. I shall be very disappointed if I can't finish 'Unwanted Dog' which is so educative and interesting, especially for someone with no first hand knowledge of USA!
Every best wish from Cambridge, UK
Comment Written 26-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023
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Appreciate your comments and the review.
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Bestt wishes!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I would greatly miss your support if you were to leave. I have learned a lot about writing from you and I would also miss reading your posts. Thank you for sharing the 'rest of the story.'
The following two paragraphs confuse me, so he was arrested before they found the evidence????
At 12:44am, on Monday, May 10, police found a knife sheath, wet white Nike shoes with blood on them, a t-shirt with blood on it, a pair of jeans with blood on them in a laundry basket, and a piece of paper with handwriting, and blood, on it in the Fucci residence. Found at the crime scene, a knife that belonged to Fucci was linked to a fragment in Tristyn Bailey's murder.
At 11:30am, on Monday, May 10, Fucci was arrested and charged with second degree murder. Two weeks later, the charge was upgraded to first degree murder.
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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023
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I would greatly miss your support if you were to leave. I have learned a lot about writing from you and I would also miss reading your posts. Thank you for sharing the 'rest of the story.'
The following two paragraphs confuse me, so he was arrested before they found the evidence????
At 12:44am, on Monday, May 10, police found a knife sheath, wet white Nike shoes with blood on them, a t-shirt with blood on it, a pair of jeans with blood on them in a laundry basket, and a piece of paper with handwriting, and blood, on it in the Fucci residence. Found at the crime scene, a knife that belonged to Fucci was linked to a fragment in Tristyn Bailey's murder.
At 11:30am, on Monday, May 10, Fucci was arrested and charged with second degree murder. Two weeks later, the charge was upgraded to first degree murder.
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Comment Written 26-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023
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Have not decided what to do yet. Appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from patcelaw
Brett, it is my wish that you do not leave the site. Because I am enjoying your story so much. However I do agree with you that the cost for the annual membership it's becoming overly expensive. When I first joined I got two years for $99 and now it's $99 a year that's unreal. I do appreciate your story so much and I'm intrigued by all that you have to say about a little boy who has gone through many trials. Patricia
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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023
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Brett, it is my wish that you do not leave the site. Because I am enjoying your story so much. However I do agree with you that the cost for the annual membership it's becoming overly expensive. When I first joined I got two years for $99 and now it's $99 a year that's unreal. I do appreciate your story so much and I'm intrigued by all that you have to say about a little boy who has gone through many trials. Patricia
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Comment Written 26-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023
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Have not decided which way to go yet. Appreciate your comments and the review.